Recent Comments

Jack
9/16/21, 3:01 AM
I wish I had a Charlie in my life! You're characters are so well written, HunkLover. Well done on another chapter.

9/16/21, 7:03 AM
Your Charlie's out there somewhere, @Jack! Thanks so much for your kind words.
9/15/21, 9:53 PM
This story is so nice and so relaxing. Thanks for this, it was needed.

9/16/21, 7:03 AM
You are very welcome, @Nephilim. Glad you're liking it.
Ben
9/15/21, 4:34 AM
I love this so much!!!!

Oddballs
9/16/21, 12:55 AM
@Ben thank you. I needed to hear that...
Ben
9/16/21, 4:38 AM
I always enjoy your stories! This one has to be my favorite! Your profile picture also makes me laugh haha.
9/15/21, 11:41 PM
Woohoo! I feel like I'm at the top of the roller coaster ready to take a thrilling erotic ride.

Yourguy92
9/15/21, 11:52 PM
And there are 6 more parts online already @PupScout
9/15/21, 11:14 PM
I can't wait for the next part, great story!
Buckyboi
9/15/21, 7:48 PM
Charlie just gets cuter and cuter! Huh, so his changes are involuntary? Thought he'd changed to meet the neighbor. Love the mental image of the poor pup stuck in the pile of clothes! Is the collar a sign he's been claimed?

9/15/21, 9:25 PM
Oh c'mon now, @Buckyboi! I'm not gonna go giving away spoilers here in the comments now, am I? But it seems like it's hooked you in!
boi98229
9/15/21, 9:17 PM
i really like the Dominant's level of control over the sub and the brainwashing process, which seems quite authentic. Unfortunately for me, the apparent lack of consent and the use of this power for dumbing down someone to this extent against their wishes seems morally wrong. On top of that it seems really impractical for the Dom to push anyone into a state in which they could no longer look after themselves. The idea that a Dominant would want to do this, even in apparent fantasy, makes trust in a real D/s relationship seem even much harder and more unlikely. i would have preferred some discussion about consent and justification, or alternatively incorporate triggers for different temporary slave "modes", which would define such things as role, relationship, intelligence, and behavior. I know it's just fantasy, and my response takes the story too seriously. Still, even as a story, while i like so much of it, this aspect of the story takes away from it for me. Of course, that's just my opinion.
9/15/21, 12:59 PM
loved this chapter, like how Dan has a life ahead of him as a rough workie, also liked that fact that Dan will a load more swearing in the future. workies i know have tatts as someone else said a skinhead workie would be good and Dan can lure other trades to the barber shop, that way Thomas can do his thing

Silent Reader
9/15/21, 9:17 PM
@MalSkinI realy miss some rude skinhead boys laty here woudl be ncie ot have some volger skins back
8/31/21, 9:00 PM
As the stepson got more and more sadistic my interest in the story waned, and I expect an ending that is just the stepdad having his life ruined. Particularly once it was revealed that the stepson's motivation was "he's bored".

9/15/21, 8:48 PM
@amul all I can say is that it's not as simple as Jay being "bored" but I revealed his motives and such in the prequel series.