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9/14/21, 9:58 PM
OK, I may or may not have a very specific fantasy about my bearish dilf of a dentist and that may or may not have made me love this story beyond reason but I'll never tell. (I hope the Dr. Daddy eventually looked after Tommy's tooth though!)

9/15/21, 9:27 AM
@amul I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'd like to think his tooth was probably fixed afterwards anyways.
boi98229
9/15/21, 6:59 AM
I have a black leather jacket I love just as much as this David/Danny, but mine lacks the magic of Danny's jacket...and this story. The leather smell that permeated my room as I read your story was both magical and arousing. Thanks!
boi98229
9/15/21, 4:59 AM
Not normally much into superhero stories, but i really enjoyed this one because of the way the dominance and control played out. i really enjoyed the back and forth, but the way the Manta Ray used intelligent techniques to establish his advantage, and followed up with bondage, close quarters and isolation, sensory deprivation, powerful physical pleasure, and brainwashing techniques all created an undeniably powerful and unassailable dominating force.
9/15/21, 4:01 AM
me enecantó
9/11/21, 10:54 AM
Love this! The introduction to the characters and the buildup to Chui submitting to Trey was phenomenal. Would love to learn how they got there, and maybe even see Trey abuse his position in fun ways with a mindless Chui. Excited for future and hopefully longer chapters! This eventual series looks to be a winner.

Conversion Enthusiast
9/15/21, 2:38 AM
@Zanifornia Thanks! Hoping to have a long enough timeline to be able to integrate some different dynamics down the line! I'm stuck on one or two more parts for the next chapter but hoping to post up sooner over later!
Anonymous
9/15/21, 2:09 AM
Great story! Loved it!
9/15/21, 12:59 AM
love it, love it, love it! I'm having a sneaking suspicion that Oliver and Luke will be having some sort of rivalry - a competitive threesome fuck? jkjkjk Still, super awesome! update soon!
9/15/21, 12:30 AM
Thanks for the compliments! Sorry I wasn't as interactive in the comments for this chapter. Lots of IRL stuff going on the last couple of weeks.
9/14/21, 10:30 PM
I enjoyed this, definitely a fun idea, but for the sake of making it a bit easier to read, you should probably separate the dialogue from the rest of the text. It looks nicer that way. Looking forward to what you write next!
Sep 12, 2021
9/14/21, 8:08 PM
Hi, Love this one. So nice that Frank likes Oliver and was interested in him. Lucky. I wish the boss I had and lusted for, like me. I can imagine myself to be Olver. Seeing That the relationship blossomed into something more was even better. So I can read this a be Oliver,. thank you.