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9/9/21, 7:54 AM
So very hot. Love stories about big buff blondes getting turned into sluts for Latinos/BBC so this hit all my buttons.
9/9/21, 7:52 AM
Have loved every chapter so far, but this was the hottest one yet. Looking forward to where the story goes from here.
Anonymous
9/9/21, 6:38 AM
Definitely option 1. Hope the next story's soon!
Martin
9/8/21, 8:46 PM
That's just so romantic, it should be posted on gaycupid, too!

9/8/21, 9:22 PM
@Martin - not sure if you meant all the series or just this chapter. And if is only this chapter, did that count as an option? even if the other aren't that romantic (well I think Edward chapter could be romantic too)

Martin
9/9/21, 6:07 AM
@Math_Reez 💙 It's always the whole series. And I think the whole series qualifies!
9/9/21, 5:19 AM
would love another chapter
9/9/21, 4:41 AM
Great story, loved the characters. Would love to go to that camp.
9/9/21, 4:27 AM
I love reading about manly men get turned into dumb slutty boytoys. can't wait for the next chapter.
nycboot
9/9/21, 2:54 AM
I loved Danni's transformation but I also like Rikki's changeover. You've invested a lot more tension with the latter character (e.g. moments where his original personality seem to be struggling). I agree that the longer it takes, the more hot it can be (kinda like working up to a literary orgasm, yes? :) ). So I know and greatly anticipate that Mikey is going to become Mikey or Mickey...but I'm also wondering what would Amir do with his harem? Just let them parade around? We know that he relishes these transformations, but once they're done, what does he get out of it - what's his reward? Somehow you've invested all these guys with distinct characters that I'm really interested to see what happens to all of them. Good work!!
9/8/21, 9:47 PM
This was amazing! You put many of my salon fantasies into words right here. Now I'm not sure if I'm more jealous of Rikki or Danni. Fantastic work!

9/8/21, 9:56 PM
@scablevoled Thank you very much. Someone had suggested that Danni's transformation was too quick, so I wanted to take this one nice and slow. Plus, I've always fantasized about someone bleaching my hair blond and using hypnosis to convince me I'm a dumb blond in this way. I think a lot of my characters life out my own personal fantasies in one way or another. And just for the record, I'm currently blond. (I use blond for me and blonde for the boys in the story because I'm not really that fem)

9/8/21, 10:43 PM
@Pup Don Personal fantasies are great for writing material! Having someone taking me to a submissive place through hypnosis while I'm in a salon chair like that would get me going crazy. and hopefully I'd be going blonde, not blond.

9/8/21, 11:22 PM
@scablevoled I love it. Writing is powerful. This story has been amazing in my exploration of my own masc vs fem ideas and attitudes. While I don't particularly want to become a femboy myself (I'm a total bear) I do love the idea of someone using hypnosis on me to erase my preconceived notions of what is masc and what is fem and forcing me to redefine what being a man means to me. Maybe someday. And writing out the extremes of that has really been fun. If I don't have a boner while I'm writing it how can I expect my readers to? And, I'll admit there's a part of me that, in another universe, in another timeline, in another dimension, I'm either a Danni or a Rikki. ;)

9/9/21, 2:47 AM
@Pup Don Totally! I've tried writing my own erotica before, but my boner usually ends up taking precedence over my word count. Reading stories like these has been my way of nurturing my fem side within while slowly encouraging myself to bring more to the surface.