Recent Comments

9/10/21, 1:48 PM
Your writing is so fluid! It reads smoothly; it’s descriptive; your vocab range is wide and it shows. I’m enjoying the fluffy romance—it’s pleasant and sweet. That you tease at it through Razz brushing it away over and over again keeps the idea of it in the reader’s head while not over-expositing, and there are so many other subtle ways their chemistry appears. The one thing I’ll say is that the wording of some of Razz’s self-reflections feel somewhat clunky, but everyone writes clunky wording sometimes, so it’s not a mark. I’m also typically not the biggest on mind control, so I like themes where things happen naturally even though the characters could use powers. It’s sweet to see the unexpected happen to someone who can do anything they expect. And a delicious sex scene! The gradual progression of Derek getting more and more eager was great. It seems like you really have a grasp on how sex works, and I found myself wishing that bottoming would feel that good for me, too. Keep up the good work. I’m on to the next!
9/10/21, 1:12 PM
I totally loved the last chapter, this one is maybe even better. Would love to get a little more description of these hot jock bodies, but god damn, such a hot story already. The way he effortlessly gets in these guys heads, the way you write that zonked-out bliss they experience? So sexy. Thanks for posting!
ohiobuck47
9/10/21, 11:49 AM
Can't wait for the next chapter.
9/10/21, 10:27 AM
Please continue!!!! incredible
Jan 20, 2007
9/10/21, 9:38 AM
Love that Aiden as a bimbo kept his 10" cock. So hot!
9/10/21, 8:17 AM
omg yes more please!
9/10/21, 7:36 AM
hot, I wonder what the consequences are.
Jack
9/9/21, 7:43 AM
I really enjoyed this story! Your characters are well written and I like this dynamic of having the hypnosis without the usual aggression that comes on GSS. I think you ought to continue this story with at least another chapter or two. Both this site and GSS would benefit from your particular style of writing. I'm glad that you found the courage to post this, and while I'm only one reader, I really think this is hot! I definitely got off on it. Please write and post more of your stuff!

Conversion Enthusiast
9/10/21, 5:06 AM
@Jack thank you! will have to get started on the next portion soon then
9/10/21, 4:27 AM
Nice new chapter! I love stories about how power corrupts. Good going!
EntrancedGay92
9/9/21, 11:33 PM
Glad to see some more father/son stories again...it's been a little dry in that department lately. I enjoyed the slow burn characteristic of this tale and I'm glad you took that approach. Looking forward to reading more.