Really enjoying this story! Found this chapter to be especially hot.

Hey, it's nice to have a new chapter in this story. Welcome back. ;)

cant wait to see where this one goes!

yes plz another chapter!

Like Martin, i am not entirely sure how real the story is, but everything about it seems totally real. For me it doesn't really matter one way or another. Your fantasy is mine as well. Thank you for telling this story! It brings to life details of my own fantasy, and makes its becoming a reality seem much more a real possibility. i loved all the details of this story. i have experienced a lot of hypnosis using recordings for submission and obedience. i thought your description of the evolution of your mental state throughout the evening was right on. This made the story more real, more arousing, and absolutely very special for me. So thanks so much - again! By the way, i have also listened to Nimja's recordings. i did like his recordings, and will go back and check his works again. Meanwhile my favorite online hypnotist is still Ultrahypnosis.

I really appreciate anything where you got multiple hypnosis and their relationship. Not the biggest foot fetishist, but it's nice to read. If you xant to do a sequel, I think you have a strong premise.

Loving the progression so far! Excited to read more

I was pleasantly surprised to see an update for this particular story (how you're writing three different complex stories at once is amazing to me). Very nice update. Hot with a great building of suspense. I'm curious if there is a statuette for each of the "ghosts" (I put that in quotes because I'm not convinced they *are* ghosts) and if we'll see them. In any case, I'm excited that they are going back to the house already and seeing how Alan might be affected by the ghosts. I hope he continues to become less of a bully and/or softer around the edges.

... What? Guess I needed to wait this chapter. Your chapters 2, pffffieewwww. They tend to introduce a shit ton of stuff to open. 1) Putting mind control, given the fact this site is still a spin-off of a mind-control porn site, is interesting. Not sure how we are supposed to take it. Probably more horrifying than some will take it (I read things on GSS or Tumblr. I don't think you wanna know). But, okay. You continue to show a lot more ideas that seems better thought-out than in "The prince and I", which was suffering, as stated before, of questionable stuff that led nowhere and things that came out too late. Here, the hypnosis could have come out in the first chapter if he received messages from his parents (should have, probably, even.) but it's nicely done. It seems in character (except the whore part. I hope this get explained. Maybe simply sold to women.). 2) But I must confess with the beginning of the chapter, what I'm used to read, I was expecting Ahmed to brainwash Zane. Maybe he'll take advantage, maybe not. Your story is your own, and my curiosity was sting (French expression. I'm interested.) on what the brainwash element add to the mix. 3) However, as soon as I read "Father's good slut", I almost facepalm. I wasn't there to comment during the writing of the previous part and so you didn't have a block of text about questionable tropes to hold with precaution. But, WHY IS THIS THE THIRD STORY WITH THE ROYAL LEAD SAVING THE COMMONER FROM A SEX-RELATED SITUATION??? I don't read a lot of Harlequin and co, but is this a massive tropes? A relationship can be build without a partner needing to get away from his home and being near-dependent on the other. Especially when the one who is taking care of the other has a much higher position. This is filled with power unbalance. Also, we are definitively reaching sex assault and abuse as a tool for easy drama. =(=(=(=(=(= 4) Also, something I didn't comment on for a while. Your writing. It's getting better, slowly but surely. The phrase are better built, there is a style that his starting to be defined, I notice less errors, and they are much more minors. The only issue still present is how fast everything happen, but you seems to be interested in short chapters so I can get over it (and I don't like long stories, so I'm not complaining). =)=)=)=)=)=)=)=)=

hot story hope there are alot more chapters