Recent Comments

9/6/21, 8:22 PM
the end line is brilliant
9/6/21, 8:15 PM
Loving this series so far! Incredibly excited to see more.
9/6/21, 6:36 PM
Haven't been on GCS in a while, and I see there is plenty of stories I have to catch up on, so i will comment only every few chapters. Compared to the first two chapters, I think there is a bit more work on grammar and writing? Might be me, but I definitively I'm less re-reading to understand what I'm seeing. There are still some " missing here and there, and the time tense seems a bit messy at time. But It's mostly the way the phrases are written that sometimes comes at odd. Nothing drastic. I really enjoy the ideas. The best friend who is ready to protect his friend against an emperor, politic intrigues, a side coupe... It just comes out WAY too fast. The main relationship especially is growing too fast for me. Seems more based on sex than feelings for now, and I'm not sure if it's supposed to come out that way. Kai barely seems to be acclimating to being in the palace.

9/6/21, 6:42 PM
@BobbyBlobfish hey, thanks for the comment. Yeah, still fairly new at this, I'm trying to get the hang of it, and put things together well. The comment helps though. It gives me a chance to improve though. I'm going to try and post another chapter to my new story this week, but, I'm right now, a wreck and kinda injured from a family brawl yesterday..... that...and I'm giving a lot of time to me Daddy. He makes me so happy :)
9/6/21, 1:33 PM
lets see how the father change, why not a power bottom?
Alex
9/6/21, 1:05 PM
This was really hot. would like to see another part and see it unfold.
9/6/21, 10:14 AM
Great story. I am loving these small changes to the pastor's personality. The easing on the profanity in the last chapter and the masturbation in this one. Those are small changes for a lot of other people but for this guy those are actually massive changes, and he doesn't really notice it. I love the slow burn in this story. For an outsider it would appear as if nothing major really happened at this first meeting, yet Tanner has already managed to push all of the guys a fair bit. If masturbation is just the first topic I can not wait to see what other sexy or even perverse stuff is gonna seem perfectly normal to these guys once Tanner has explained it to them.
Martin
9/6/21, 8:14 AM
You're really a very talented writer. Funny, witty and hot. And the reader feeld for the guys. Both of them... let's where this is heading!
9/6/21, 7:25 AM
i don't know why but the victim is very sympathetic that it makes me want to punch tanner. good story though. i suppose the dead wife and the christian struggle got to me. the fact that tanner coopted that meager budget for his own gain really grind my gear. i hope he (tanner) gets whats coming to him.
Anonymous
9/6/21, 1:00 AM
oh how about Izuku Midoriya underwear & musk fetish ships with todoroki

Raibunny87
9/6/21, 5:33 AM
@Sure! Is this like a dark todoroki-?
9/6/21, 5:25 AM
great story (i cant seem to look at the pics though)