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Feb 24, 2025
2/25/25, 3:28 AM
Great read.
Anon
2/25/25, 3:27 AM
Well...this is interesting, and a bit of a mess. Yousef and his father seems to be settling in well but well...there still is the fact that he and his dad have to figure out how to navigate their human family. I doubt either wants to abandon them. And Oakley is in the mix as well...Mahmood's jealousy is something I am a bit worried about. Hopefully if things can't progress, Oakley can move off amicably. Though it seems they are figuring out how to navigate things. The reference to Schezerade's tales is nice...though hopefully these two never have to say stories to avoid death. I wonder when we're going to start seeing them navigate their cultural background like Rey has with Chavez in light of their new state of being. It seems Ray has met Alpha Spencer during an alcoholics meeting or both have been affiliated with such in the past. It's good to know that they seem...somewhat familiar in that they've experienced the struggle of alcoholism. In particular, I think Ray struggling with not going for the bottle after sensory overload makes sense. I just hope he can keep being involved with the church even as a layperson in some way.... if not as a priest. Spencer seems kind but who knows as an alpha what he may be dealing with. Coups seem to be in season right now. Chavez seems to want to wean Ray off from human baggage, but the question becomes what defines "baggage". They both seem to genuinely be faithful, and that makes what "baggage" is somewhat complex. Toddson as always is his cynical self, but it's clear Chavez genuinely believes in what he says- he's not making things up. Though speaking of Toddson...I had a feeling he'd do something eventually- but to target Paul...and Mullins seems in on this too? That's....not going to end well for either of them. Though honestly, Mullins was starting to edge into being power hungry anyway. On the other hand, whatever happened to Toddson's sister-in-law? Clearly nothing good. And that mysterious caller and letter giver is still about- are they a hunter? I do hope that somebody at least tries to help out with Frank. Bill was researching- but I think something is going to happen with him. He's been feeling alienated and that likely won't end well. I don't think Mahmood is going to like the fact somebody was made a collateral sacrifice over it who wasn't guilty of anything. He likely knows a little too well from the war in Lebanon likely how logic can that can be used to cause terrible things. And even if in this case there was no other way...it's not something I think Mahmood would ever find comfortable.
2/25/25, 12:17 AM
Thanks for this series. It started off slow for me, but I ended up loving your progression and the speed at which you released it too. It was like small bites to an eight course dinner. Nicely done.

Willie Cici
2/25/25, 2:55 AM
@[mutak](/user/show/952269) Thanks for the kind words. Glad you enjoyed it!
2/25/25, 1:44 AM
Excellent, Blufman! You wouldn't happen to know of a Gas that could transform me...
2/25/25, 1:16 AM
Not bad, but you want to use a text to speech program to better review your own writing. Keep it up dude.
2/25/25, 12:32 AM
Can't wait to read more, this is one of the hottest and most interesting stories I have read in a long time!

2/25/25, 1:15 AM
@[Hypnoboi 23](/user/show/10023086) Quite a compliment, thanks! Glad you liked it
2/24/25, 7:52 PM
that was very good, is this a one-shot?

Pcm
2/25/25, 1:00 AM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) Nope, there is a continuation. It's a two-part series

2/25/25, 1:02 AM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) okay, thanks for the replay
2/24/25, 3:15 PM
This is one of those stories that I never thought I would enjoy but ended up being a very good, thought-provoking (and yes, hot) read. The focus on Robin's love for Jack and his sorrow for his last golem's fate was emotionally involving in a profound way. It was beautiful when Jack/Junior sprouted and Robin was able to work through his trauma through tending and loving the seedling. The relationship helped him to process and accept what he had done with his powers and, in choosing to give them up, had thereby gained much more than he could have known. Thank you for writing this story and for sharing it with us. It was a way to explore love and intimacy in an entirely new way for me. :sparkling_heart: :potted_plant:

2/25/25, 12:15 AM
@[TSquared](/user/show/968206) Shucks dude. Thanks for reading, and thanks for your awesome comment on the story. You’ve set my mind ablaze reading your perspective on things. Love and hearts Spiders
2/24/25, 11:09 PM
WOW! That was so good. I feel like it was like just powerfully erotic and exciting. THANKYOU so much. What is going to happen next? I cannot wait to find out if Chris has selfish intention.

2/25/25, 12:13 AM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Thanks for the kind words! Stay tuned, there’s much more to come. We’ll be seeing more of Jake and Chris, and we’ll meet some new passengers as well :)
2/24/25, 10:47 PM
Nice!! Can't wait to see more!

2/25/25, 12:10 AM
@[Whitegloves](/user/show/1636969) Glad you enjoyed it!