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9/3/21, 9:11 PM
I lost interest when they wouldn't let Liam use the bathroom. Daniel and Nate are turning out just as depraved as their dad. Withholding urination is literal torture. Why are they doing that?

9/4/21, 8:10 AM
@Cutlerfan Hmm, food for thought. My intention was for it to come across a bit cruel, so success! But the final part about Liam being turned on was meant to show that he was into it. It's a perversion of the bully-big-brother, an extension of making him sniff their stink, sitting on him, etc. They are immensely overprotective of him, so they wouldn't torture him. Clearly it didn't work though so...
Anonymous
9/4/21, 6:02 AM
not totally what i expected i thought his friend would come to the rescue but also turned into a slave
Bigger
9/4/21, 5:33 AM
omg. This is good news! We need to know what happens to the other two guys!
May 20, 2021
9/4/21, 1:31 AM
It was just what you said you were aiming for: short and sweet. I very much enjoyed this.
9/3/21, 9:55 PM
so fucking
9/3/21, 9:52 PM
This is awesome, feet and hypnosis, totally hot AF!
9/3/21, 9:06 PM
excellent! very original and very well
Rspark
9/3/21, 6:21 PM
It's hot but there's no hypnosis so I think I'll pass on this. This is very well-written though so I hope you continue with the story!
9/3/21, 6:17 PM
Love Your great Story. Thank You for that. Even if I'm starting to feel a little sorry for poor Jax. Don't get me wrong, I like his and Ronnie's development. I just hope that Ronnie gets Jax's instincts under control and can protect him from himself. But make Your Thing it will be great, hope of more.
9/3/21, 4:46 PM
any plans for part 3?

9/3/21, 5:02 PM
@darkblade2814 Yes! I'm about halfway through it, but life keeps getting in the way. Soon, very soon.

9/3/21, 5:05 PM
@S. Q. Neemie thank you, lets see how the others will change