Recent Comments

leonardoPT
8/30/21, 9:30 PM
I love the story since I made it up to this chapter. But if I understand correctly, I must go to another site (paid?) to read the further chapters. That seems mindfucking in (commercial) practice. At least say that at the start of a series.

8/30/21, 11:04 PM
@leonardoPT Hi. Thanks for your comments and thanks for the feedback. Further chapters will be posted here in the future (Next chapter will probably be posted between this weekend and next weekend), but yes, the paid site will stay ahead of the story. To be perfectly honest, I lost my job a year ago and paying readers have been one of my sources of income to keep on going.

leonardoPT
8/30/21, 11:29 PM
@Lookintomyeyesboy I sympathize with your position, and writing stories for fellow kinksters is a real honorable way to help in making a living. And it adds beauty to the world. But i feel mislead when you write halfway the series: "If you want to know what comes next, you can find the rest of the story in my Patreon " What read like that you cannot know what comes next unless you go to Patreon. It might be seen as walking over the edge, but for me it is not respectful to the readers and GSS. My suggestion would be to say straightforward (at the start of the series) that it will be published in GSS, but those who support you in Patreon, have a head start and perhaps other privileges. Success wih your writings.

Martin
8/31/21, 3:39 PM
I agree with Lenonardo, that it would be better to mention that the chapters will be released here some time later as well.

8/31/21, 6:39 PM
@Martin Got it. Let me think of the wording and I'll put it in all the chapters here.
nycboot
8/31/21, 3:04 PM
Mike will be the really challenging one. I'll look forward to see how you deal with him.

8/31/21, 4:54 PM
@nycboot I'm glad you picked up on that. Yes, Mike will be a challenge but I have big plans for him.
8/31/21, 4:46 PM
love! so hot
nycboot
8/31/21, 2:56 PM
Whoa! I'm not into twinks, femme bois etc. - and those preferences made no difference because this chapter was wonderful! I loved the way you first introduce the changes - not with the panties but with Dan's feeling that something is not right....and only later do you show Amir to have these hypnotic powers, especially with his eyes, so that Dan is really helpless. I guess in a sense your writing is so "tuned in" that it doesn't matter what the style of man - what matters more is the process of change and that you have done so masterfully! Now if you have more chapters, can you top what you've already done? I'll be waiting with arousal and anticipation.
REDMAN Richard
8/31/21, 2:33 PM
In the perfect future world, the vast majority of men will be transformed into lovely, obedient daddies' girls.
8/31/21, 2:23 PM
Damn that was hot
REDMAN Richard
8/31/21, 2:20 PM
They must all obey and serve the Employer.
8/31/21, 11:09 AM
Very creative! You made a fascinating backdrop to an incredibly hot story - well done, man!
8/29/21, 3:46 AM
Still looking forward to chapter 2! Hope there's another salon scene in the works.

8/31/21, 6:49 AM
@scablevoled Next chapter (which is awaiting approval) is a short one but sets the stage for the next big transformation, which will be coming very soon.
Grant Wish
8/27/21, 5:23 PM
Please please please give is the rest of this story!

8/31/21, 3:36 AM
@Grant Wish This is for sure high on the list of things i want to continue/finish , but ive got to get my house in order and deal with some personal issue before i make any promises to anyone.