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8/31/21, 1:56 PM
I wonder in what Rick and Mike will turn into

8/31/21, 4:58 PM
@darkblade2814 The mind reels with possibilities, doesn't it. :)

8/31/21, 7:23 PM
@Pup Don if you accept suggestions, why not making one of them a himbo and the other one a manwhore?

8/31/21, 7:29 PM
@darkblade2814 You're on track with the himbo thing except that the term "himbo" seems to be connected with dumb jocks anymore and I really don't care for that aesthetic. But dumb and slutty is definitely on the menu. Manwhore? Hmmmm. Might not fit what I have planned but I'm gonna tuck that idea away for a future story.

8/31/21, 7:59 PM
@Pup Don that is okay they were just suggestions, and I meant himbo as "dumb big and nice/good" male, I hope you do good with the manwhore idea on the future
8/31/21, 7:35 PM
So Hot!!! Would like to see a continuation of this story.
8/31/21, 7:05 PM
I hope this one doesn't get lost in the flood of new stories posted today, because it was SO hot. I love how you depict the men in the company falling under the Employer's control.
8/31/21, 1:59 PM
Awesome buildup! Danni is a femboi style icon in my book, wish I could go out looking like that. Looking forward to seeing how his friends turn out.

8/31/21, 4:58 PM
@scablevoled Thank you very much. I've been really busy lately and haven't had a lot of time to write but I've been working on what's going to happen in my head. Now I just need to sit down and write it all out. But that's coming very soon. Rick and Mike will both undergo some amazing transformations.

8/31/21, 5:04 PM
@Pup Don Looking forward! Next thing on your to-do list should be opening up a real life boi transformation salon. You've got quite the knack for it.

8/31/21, 5:13 PM
@scablevoled That would be fun. Most of my stories come from my own desires. I wouldn't want to transform quite to the extreme that Danni has but I have to admit I do love the idea of exploring my own fem side. I'm a bear, so that would be quite a contrast. My Bimbear series was all about my fetish for being dumbed down through hypnosis. There's also a fembear character in there too.

8/31/21, 5:26 PM
@Pup Don I'm basically a twink looking to do the same. Maybe not as far as Danni (unless I'm in the privacy of my own home), but definitely want to bring my fem out on a more consistent basis. It's tough finding boi-specific communities/resources out there. Loved the Bimbear series! Angel was a fav of mine.

8/31/21, 6:27 PM
@scablevoled I see a lot of it on Twitter. Fembois are huge. I bet you look adorable in a pair of panties.
leonardoPT
8/30/21, 9:30 PM
I love the story since I made it up to this chapter. But if I understand correctly, I must go to another site (paid?) to read the further chapters. That seems mindfucking in (commercial) practice. At least say that at the start of a series.

8/30/21, 11:04 PM
@leonardoPT Hi. Thanks for your comments and thanks for the feedback. Further chapters will be posted here in the future (Next chapter will probably be posted between this weekend and next weekend), but yes, the paid site will stay ahead of the story. To be perfectly honest, I lost my job a year ago and paying readers have been one of my sources of income to keep on going.

leonardoPT
8/30/21, 11:29 PM
@Lookintomyeyesboy I sympathize with your position, and writing stories for fellow kinksters is a real honorable way to help in making a living. And it adds beauty to the world. But i feel mislead when you write halfway the series: "If you want to know what comes next, you can find the rest of the story in my Patreon " What read like that you cannot know what comes next unless you go to Patreon. It might be seen as walking over the edge, but for me it is not respectful to the readers and GSS. My suggestion would be to say straightforward (at the start of the series) that it will be published in GSS, but those who support you in Patreon, have a head start and perhaps other privileges. Success wih your writings.

Martin
8/31/21, 3:39 PM
I agree with Lenonardo, that it would be better to mention that the chapters will be released here some time later as well.

8/31/21, 6:39 PM
@Martin Got it. Let me think of the wording and I'll put it in all the chapters here.
nycboot
8/31/21, 3:04 PM
Mike will be the really challenging one. I'll look forward to see how you deal with him.

8/31/21, 4:54 PM
@nycboot I'm glad you picked up on that. Yes, Mike will be a challenge but I have big plans for him.
8/31/21, 4:46 PM
love! so hot
nycboot
8/31/21, 2:56 PM
Whoa! I'm not into twinks, femme bois etc. - and those preferences made no difference because this chapter was wonderful! I loved the way you first introduce the changes - not with the panties but with Dan's feeling that something is not right....and only later do you show Amir to have these hypnotic powers, especially with his eyes, so that Dan is really helpless. I guess in a sense your writing is so "tuned in" that it doesn't matter what the style of man - what matters more is the process of change and that you have done so masterfully! Now if you have more chapters, can you top what you've already done? I'll be waiting with arousal and anticipation.
REDMAN Richard
8/31/21, 2:33 PM
In the perfect future world, the vast majority of men will be transformed into lovely, obedient daddies' girls.
8/31/21, 2:23 PM
Damn that was hot