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Aug 29, 2021
8/30/21, 3:17 AM
Wow! A very hot transformation story!

Kods
8/30/21, 4:31 PM
@Cutlerfan Thanks for the comment!
8/30/21, 3:26 PM
wow super turn on story hope there are alot more chapters
8/29/21, 3:05 PM
Super Hot! Keep it up!!

8/30/21, 3:25 PM
great hot story cant wait for more
8/27/21, 10:36 AM
this was well worth the wait, one of the best stories I have read. Keep up the good work ☺

8/29/21, 3:38 AM
@Controlled Twink Hi! I'm so happy you enjoyed it ;) Wait till you see what comes next. Guarantee it will be worth the wait :D
leonardoPT
8/30/21, 2:33 PM
No-holds-barred raw story. It would have been fitting in the atmosphere if Testlo had not survived the punishment, though I don't know if the rules here allow that. What is great about the story is the clever build of a magic atmosphere that is hard, if not impossible to survive.

8/30/21, 3:07 PM
@leonardoPT thank you for commenting. I write for myself and if it is 'fantasmagorical' I like to put it here (I also do Literotica and Nifty). As I was writing this, I wondered if Spiral fans might be put off that the story begins with a woman, but my sexual interests are not confined to just men. I am, as you might have guessed from this and other stories I've written, very centric on the essence of manhood-no, not the cock, the balls. As such, I could care less who plays with mine--men, women and the best, dogs. I digress. The story is setup with an 'afterword' which is what I do when I have reached a climax and could go in any number of directions to wrap things up--including continuing chapters. If Testlo had not survived the punishment it would have been too close to a snuff story and I am simply not into that at all. As it stands, I like everyone in the story to have a good time and the boundary between pleasure and pain is an extremely thin one, which of course is explored here. The reader is left to decide if Testlo will be looking forward to his next round with the Mascular or not.

leonardoPT
8/30/21, 3:19 PM
@AgingAthlete Thank you for your response. I can't speak for Spiral fans, individual tastes are too different for that. Let me say that I applaud the transformation and did not immediately drop out at the beginning. I appreciate your explanations and I wouldn't be surprised if a seed (sic) was planted in Testlo to -long after he's been reinvigorated- embark on a new round with the Mascular.
8/30/21, 3:53 AM
This is top tier. I love how you made a matriarchal society that makes sense. I love everything about this. one question, do gay men still go through the cycle? if they do, why are they in a higher class than gay men? my best guess is because society doesn't see them as depositers.

8/30/21, 4:12 AM
@BlackJaxus Thanks for the great feedback! Queer guys do not cycle. Which is a shame for queer kinksters out there, but might just factor into what happens to Zeke next time he gets his itch scratched :D

Anonymous
8/30/21, 8:07 AM
where do bisexual men fall in this new world? @Noam de Pluma

8/30/21, 1:06 PM
@anonymous You know, we never got that far. My original though was that anyone who's not a Kinsey 0 will be 'normal' and it's just the fully straight dudes who cycle. Of course, in this world, maybe the ratio of fully straight:queer dudes will be different...

Anonymous
8/30/21, 2:49 PM
It's a fascinating setup, because it's basically three genders now. female, fertile male and non-fertile male. I look forward to seeing how else this affect the @Noam de Pluma
8/30/21, 2:39 PM
hot. definitely need more stories about big hot blond bimbos
8/30/21, 2:25 PM
I think doing something to the father would be nice, why not make him a whore and paying Martinez back?
Jul 16, 2018
Ron
8/30/21, 11:01 AM
Sehr gute Geschichte, passt genau zu mir, danke.
Anonymous
8/30/21, 8:37 AM
Please use punctuation and standard spellings