Recent Comments

8/29/21, 11:56 AM
As usual, the sex scenes are really well-written. I wish I was interested enough in sex acts to write about them in such exquisite detail. However, I feel like the story itself is spinning its wheels a bit. With everyone in this universe totally up for sex all the time, I'm not seeing much conflict or dramatic tension. (I know you tried with the whole "will the librarian be mad at them for having sex in the library?" thing, but it was completely obvious that the librarian wouldn't be mad and would instead join in). One suggestion I'd give is to return to some of the supporting characters you introduced in the first chapter (when the world was just beginning to change), rather than constantly introducing new characters right before each sex scene. Still, I'm interested to see what the next chapter brings.
8/29/21, 4:15 AM
Wyatt is certainly an entitled little shit. This could go so many directions, interested to see what's in store for him.
8/29/21, 3:08 AM
Oh, damn, Wyatt is truly unpleasant, despicable even. I wonder where you will take this tale!
DD
8/29/21, 2:56 AM
Hmm, eager to see more of what's to come, what did that guy do I wonder?
BearBoi
8/29/21, 12:46 AM
i don't know about anyone else, but I imagine Bussy with the voice of Jiz https://youtu.be/xAK108u2xAs
8/29/21, 12:32 AM
A great start, fantastic premise!
8/28/21, 11:33 PM
Great story and character development. Thought there would be some great sex. May be next chapter. Luv where this is going.....
8/28/21, 11:23 PM
FIrst time (virgin) reading one of your stories. I'm hooked and need to read more. Your detailed descriptions of the characters are great and keep me hard & leaking. Keep up the great work as I read on....
8/28/21, 10:26 PM
Please continue!
8/28/21, 9:52 PM
I can't help but dislike the muscle queens, but I also can't be sure that they're really any worse (or better) than the muscle freaks. You've set up an interesting contest between opposing sides, with ambiguity as to whether they are opposed at all within the context of "the organization". This is definitely the part where the story could fly off the rails. It would have been easy to bring this to a tidy end with just the phenomenal muscle growth fantasy and aggressive sex that you already created to play with. But I feel like the author is self-aware enough not to let things descend into absurdity and lose the erotic edge.