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Aug 29, 2021
8/30/21, 1:38 AM
A very satisfying and sexy merge story. I expected them to eventually break the spell in true Freaky Friday fashion but I'm not unhappy with their unique partnership.
8/29/21, 9:41 PM
lol I feel like I'm ms Ruth reading this story 😂 really hope Sam ends up with Marc tho, he seems like such a sweet guy 😊 also, I was so sure that keeping that position was going to end with Sam accidentally impaled on Marc lol 😏 guess there's always next time

8/29/21, 11:05 PM
Oooh! Haha, now I wish I had done that instead... I probably shouldn't go back and edit it... @Botbot
8/28/21, 10:29 PM
I'm hoping for more!

Yourguy92
8/29/21, 9:49 PM
@Cutlerfan 100%
8/28/21, 8:01 PM
classic mcstories

Yourguy92
8/29/21, 9:49 PM
@Brody absolutely
8/27/21, 7:00 PM
Also, since when couldn't partial edits be made? I'm pretty sure that was allowed. So he should totally be ae to cross out "magic dick" but keep the rest. One of the frustrating elemebts of us following the "straight" guy is we never get to enjoy the sex scenes as the top or to completion. I wish marc's cock slipped into his while they were posing.

8/28/21, 11:43 PM
@Heru Kane It's not so much they can't make partial edits, as they're both too panicky and too sex-addled to think through all the myriad variations, so they don't even try.

8/29/21, 12:03 AM
Exactly! Gabe and Sam are horny dumbasses who aren't thinking 100% logically about how the book works. @HyperMuscleDirk

8/29/21, 12:12 AM
@bluesuedewho I miss the logic of the starting chapters. They were quite enjoyable. Now its thoughtless decisions rather than the ones where they were smart enough to protect the book and to make sure they couldn't write themselves out of reality and such.

8/29/21, 12:48 AM
I'm not sure either Gabe or Sam are especially logical thinkers! Gabe might have been a bit more relatively thoughtful about edits (and Sam has the occasional lucid moment), but both of them are mostly just thinking about getting off at the end of the day. Not that there aren't smart edits planned for future chapters -- just expect most of the drama to come from wacky changes! @Heru Kane

Anonymous
8/29/21, 2:05 AM
@bluesuedewho @Heru Kane I mean, I personally kind of *like* the fact that they aren't making perfectly logical decisions. It lets things spiral out of control and create... you know, conflict, drama, intrigue. One of the fun things about this story for *me* specifically is that things don't go as planned, and we get to watch two well meaning sex motivated idiots warp reality and scramble to deal with the consequences. I'm not sure if the early chapters were really "more logical" so much as just... things hadn't escalated as much yet, there wasn't horny juice in the water supply, and the two of them were a bit more cautious about using the book. Idk! I've loved this story a LOT so far and I trust bluesuedewho to create an interesting plot without needing it to come from Sam and Gabe's direct intentions. Nothing has felt out of character really for me so much as just a natural progression from where we started given the changes so far.

8/29/21, 9:42 PM
@Anonymous agreed! this has been fun while not throwing away previous plot points like Marc being into Sam or the people in
8/29/21, 7:36 PM
oh this was WONDERFUL I am very happy with what you're doing with this story, I've been a fan of yours for quite some time now! can't wait for more xx
8/29/21, 4:01 PM
"was there any pussy I hadn’t fucked yet? I wouldn’t do girls below thirteen coz they are trouble" yo what the fuck?
8/29/21, 2:18 PM
looking forward to seeing where this goes!
8/29/21, 11:58 AM
Fascinating. I am so here for this storyline.
8/29/21, 11:56 AM
As usual, the sex scenes are really well-written. I wish I was interested enough in sex acts to write about them in such exquisite detail. However, I feel like the story itself is spinning its wheels a bit. With everyone in this universe totally up for sex all the time, I'm not seeing much conflict or dramatic tension. (I know you tried with the whole "will the librarian be mad at them for having sex in the library?" thing, but it was completely obvious that the librarian wouldn't be mad and would instead join in). One suggestion I'd give is to return to some of the supporting characters you introduced in the first chapter (when the world was just beginning to change), rather than constantly introducing new characters right before each sex scene. Still, I'm interested to see what the next chapter brings.