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BearBoi
8/29/21, 12:46 AM
i don't know about anyone else, but I imagine Bussy with the voice of Jiz https://youtu.be/xAK108u2xAs
8/29/21, 12:32 AM
A great start, fantastic premise!
8/28/21, 11:33 PM
Great story and character development. Thought there would be some great sex. May be next chapter. Luv where this is going.....
8/28/21, 11:23 PM
FIrst time (virgin) reading one of your stories. I'm hooked and need to read more. Your detailed descriptions of the characters are great and keep me hard & leaking. Keep up the great work as I read on....
8/28/21, 10:26 PM
Please continue!
8/28/21, 9:52 PM
I can't help but dislike the muscle queens, but I also can't be sure that they're really any worse (or better) than the muscle freaks. You've set up an interesting contest between opposing sides, with ambiguity as to whether they are opposed at all within the context of "the organization". This is definitely the part where the story could fly off the rails. It would have been easy to bring this to a tidy end with just the phenomenal muscle growth fantasy and aggressive sex that you already created to play with. But I feel like the author is self-aware enough not to let things descend into absurdity and lose the erotic edge.
8/28/21, 9:45 PM
Great start! Anxious to see where this goes.
8/28/21, 8:54 PM
Another 5.0 wank material one-handed read.

8/28/21, 9:34 PM
@amul That's the kind of review I like!
8/28/21, 8:16 PM
looking very interesting!
7/21/20, 1:20 AM
> A five on every rating!! > wow! Thank you! I'm always concerned about the "wanking" rating. I mean, I know we're writing jerk-off stories, but I can never be sure guys are gonna start jerking.... especially on a story like this

8/28/21, 7:30 PM
@absman420 Oh, this chapter was a one-hand read for sure.