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nycboot
8/27/21, 1:58 PM
Wow wonderful story. The first reading was (for me) pure j/o arousal which worked splendidly. Then I read it again to savor the good parts. Once cleared of the fog of arousal, I got to see how extremely well you wrote the story. Every character has a deep motivation (even if it's been altered). The third time around I was really taken with Peter's confessions - that just continues the arousal. As far as the comment on the long exposition, yeah, I can see that when I first read it. But going through it again (and again), the exposition doesn't seem long at all. It all forms a wonderful ever-rising arc. A good story has to have a good set-up which results in making the main action all the more potent. I would leave it as it. (Some of Hitchcock films are criticized for long expositions - but once you actually listen to the dialogue and see the visuals, you see that the expositions connect more tightly with the later actions and events. I would posit the same is operating in this story.) So bravo for an excellent story!

8/28/21, 8:57 AM
@nycboot Thank you for your wonderful feedback. Hearing that you've liked my work enough to reread it multiple times is some of the best praise i could possibly ask for. Knowing which parts resonated with you both thrill me as a creator and show me what works well and what to consider using again. Your words bring me such joy, so thank you so much for taking the time to write them.
Aug 27, 2021
8/28/21, 4:05 AM
Hot, sexy story with a lot of group sex...my kind of story! Excellent writing...you felt like you were there in the shed with all the guys (wish I was). The hairy boss sounded super sexy, the character descriptions were great and the sex scenes had me hard an leaking the hole time. Keep up the great and write more!

8/28/21, 8:24 AM
@MuscleSon69 Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!
Horny
8/28/21, 5:58 AM
oh i was kinda hoping for a happy ending for Lee, imo its never really fun when the tormentor gets away scott free with their acts. this was still a fun story though, thanks for your work!
Aug 26, 2021
EJG
8/28/21, 5:26 AM
Hot. Just fantasising he becomes the office slut
8/28/21, 4:23 AM
so fucking hot! cant wait to see what else he puts into the agenda!
8/28/21, 2:02 AM
I do hope Sam can accept that he likes doing "gay stuff" eventually.
8/28/21, 1:04 AM
I love the story, and I especially love the interactions between Gabe and Sam. I can definitely see that Sam and Marc are being pulled together with the edits made, but I hope that even if Sam eventually succumbs to Marc magic dick he doesn't lose his relationship with Gabe. No matter what happens, this is a fantastic story, and I'm super excited to see what changes and events you write in future chapters, keep up the awesome work!

8/28/21, 1:47 AM
Thanks! I try to avoid spoilers (although I'm probably bad at it...) but I will say that Sam and Gabe are still close friends at the end of the story! @Jacker
8/28/21, 12:12 AM
I wasn’t expecting another chapter so soon — great surprise! The tension between Marc and Sam is my favourite part of this whole deal, though Gabriel and Sam is a really fun dynamic too. I’m a little worried for Sam. At the rate this is going, I suspect bottoming might become a straight dude thing. And there aren’t that many straight guys left on campus! I’m seriously curious what’s up with the black suits. I sure hope nobody pranks them by replacing their bottled water with tap water.

8/28/21, 1:45 AM
It was originally one massive chapter, but I thought splitting it up and polishing both bits would be a smoother read! The black suits plot thread definitely starts moving faster in the next chapter. @Derek Williams
8/27/21, 11:49 PM
Rook was right. That was hot.
8/27/21, 10:46 PM
This series is just an absolute gift. So hot and funny and heartwarming. Thanks again for posting.

8/27/21, 11:04 PM
Thanks! And you're welcome! @tenser13