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8/28/21, 12:12 AM
I wasn’t expecting another chapter so soon — great surprise! The tension between Marc and Sam is my favourite part of this whole deal, though Gabriel and Sam is a really fun dynamic too. I’m a little worried for Sam. At the rate this is going, I suspect bottoming might become a straight dude thing. And there aren’t that many straight guys left on campus! I’m seriously curious what’s up with the black suits. I sure hope nobody pranks them by replacing their bottled water with tap water.

8/28/21, 1:45 AM
It was originally one massive chapter, but I thought splitting it up and polishing both bits would be a smoother read! The black suits plot thread definitely starts moving faster in the next chapter. @Derek Williams
8/27/21, 11:49 PM
Rook was right. That was hot.
8/27/21, 10:46 PM
This series is just an absolute gift. So hot and funny and heartwarming. Thanks again for posting.

8/27/21, 11:04 PM
Thanks! And you're welcome! @tenser13
8/27/21, 9:52 PM
Fun!
8/25/21, 11:05 AM
Haha, my one complaint with the fic previously was that while I loved the consensual hypnosis since it's not something you really ever see, i wasn't really a fan of the way the narrative kinda went "actually nevermind, Cyrus is like every other manipulative hypno jerk and consent had nothing to do with all the fun changes" But then this happened! 10/10 absolutely love being made to eat my words lmao 👌💖

8/27/21, 9:30 PM
@Cumguts ohhh yeah I know what you mean. personally i prefer 100% consensual for pretty much everything, but I also like the shock of a transformation. it's a hard thing to balance, and when writing the original, it was getting too long and my goal was just to get it finished for the pandemic competition. i wasn't too happy with that ending, either, but i know some people were into it and might not like this "actually they're super romantic and in love and happy, jack was just shocked and needed context/memories to feel the same". to each their own! personally i like the happy ending more :P if i were to rewrite the whole thing, I don't think i'd have that "actually Cyrus is mean" twist at all, tbh. it made it a little convoluted to untangle in this part, hahaha.
8/27/21, 7:56 PM
The entire art class scene was super hot, especially how Sam's ass kept making it harder and harder for Marc to hold on, inadvertently leading to near sex between them right in class. I'll admit to hoping hoping they would fuck, but I'm guessing you're saving that for a future chapter. The descriptions of the sex in the bathroom, as well as Sam's reactions to it was super hot. I also loved how Marc was still there to make sure that Sam was okay. I like Marc a lot and want to see him have a happy ending. I grow more intrigued by the black suited people and that some of the teachers might know about the book. Or they at least know of magic being a thing. I do think the teacher angle is a little out of left field, but maybe there were hints I missed because of the heat in previous chapters. Guess I might have to go reread them. I'll also echo MonsterMash in that I enjoy that Sam's idea to keep himself straight continues to make himself gayer, while still thinking everything he does is only for straights. I'm also impressed by the last edit Sam made. It was remarkably smart and not made out of lust. I'm looking forward to finding out how this story is going to unfold. And what other sexy shenanigans Sam is going to find himself in.

8/27/21, 8:31 PM
Thanks for the detailed comments! They make writing silly smut worth it! @Proteus
Anonymous
8/27/21, 7:53 PM
I absolutely love everything about this series, the build up is insane and every single scene is extremely hot. This has been my favorite series to read in years, keep up the amazing work!

8/27/21, 8:26 PM
Thanks! It definitely helps that I'm getting editing help and brainstorms from two people! @
8/27/21, 6:40 PM
Is it bad form to comment on a story you had some small part in? Hopefully it’s not. My contributions were a few small suggestions and occasional one or two line snippets plus numerous rereads. Which I’m happy to do. All that said… I can’t get enough of this story. I love Sam continuing to fix things in ways that make him gayer and gayer. I love how hot both Gabe and Marc are. I loved the build up in the art class modeling scene and then the hotness of the scene in the bathroom after. I loved the deepening of the mystery with the people in suits. I loved Sam being a dumbass. I loved the art class teacher. I loved the hints of teachers maybe knowing more about the people in suits maybe. I loved Marc throwing Teddy (or Freddy?) over his shoulder like a cave man. I loved Melanie continuing to not be interested in Sam. I loved Sam’s thinking about being gay or straight in regards to the Kinsey scale. I loved the Ethical Slut being tossed in there. Most of all, I love how much time and effort I know Blue and Nutiper put into this story. It’s extremely polished and extremely well-done and extremely hot, with more hotness to follow. Thanks to you both.

8/27/21, 7:30 PM
Thanks! And wow, I appreciate all the love even though you're probably sick of seeing a million drafts! @MonsterMash62
Elm
8/27/21, 7:21 PM
Looking good! seems like a fun start for a story.
8/27/21, 6:47 PM
I so wanted to like this chapter but there are many things here that aren't to my liking. Which is absolutely sad as I loved the start of this story. I don't know, like I wouldn't comment but due to how things were it feels like the magic of it has changed.