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8/28/21, 4:23 AM
so fucking hot! cant wait to see what else he puts into the agenda!
8/28/21, 2:02 AM
I do hope Sam can accept that he likes doing "gay stuff" eventually.
8/28/21, 1:04 AM
I love the story, and I especially love the interactions between Gabe and Sam. I can definitely see that Sam and Marc are being pulled together with the edits made, but I hope that even if Sam eventually succumbs to Marc magic dick he doesn't lose his relationship with Gabe. No matter what happens, this is a fantastic story, and I'm super excited to see what changes and events you write in future chapters, keep up the awesome work!

8/28/21, 1:47 AM
Thanks! I try to avoid spoilers (although I'm probably bad at it...) but I will say that Sam and Gabe are still close friends at the end of the story! @Jacker
8/28/21, 12:12 AM
I wasn’t expecting another chapter so soon — great surprise! The tension between Marc and Sam is my favourite part of this whole deal, though Gabriel and Sam is a really fun dynamic too. I’m a little worried for Sam. At the rate this is going, I suspect bottoming might become a straight dude thing. And there aren’t that many straight guys left on campus! I’m seriously curious what’s up with the black suits. I sure hope nobody pranks them by replacing their bottled water with tap water.

8/28/21, 1:45 AM
It was originally one massive chapter, but I thought splitting it up and polishing both bits would be a smoother read! The black suits plot thread definitely starts moving faster in the next chapter. @Derek Williams
8/27/21, 11:49 PM
Rook was right. That was hot.
8/27/21, 10:46 PM
This series is just an absolute gift. So hot and funny and heartwarming. Thanks again for posting.

8/27/21, 11:04 PM
Thanks! And you're welcome! @tenser13
8/27/21, 9:52 PM
Fun!
8/25/21, 11:05 AM
Haha, my one complaint with the fic previously was that while I loved the consensual hypnosis since it's not something you really ever see, i wasn't really a fan of the way the narrative kinda went "actually nevermind, Cyrus is like every other manipulative hypno jerk and consent had nothing to do with all the fun changes" But then this happened! 10/10 absolutely love being made to eat my words lmao 👌💖

8/27/21, 9:30 PM
@Cumguts ohhh yeah I know what you mean. personally i prefer 100% consensual for pretty much everything, but I also like the shock of a transformation. it's a hard thing to balance, and when writing the original, it was getting too long and my goal was just to get it finished for the pandemic competition. i wasn't too happy with that ending, either, but i know some people were into it and might not like this "actually they're super romantic and in love and happy, jack was just shocked and needed context/memories to feel the same". to each their own! personally i like the happy ending more :P if i were to rewrite the whole thing, I don't think i'd have that "actually Cyrus is mean" twist at all, tbh. it made it a little convoluted to untangle in this part, hahaha.
8/27/21, 7:56 PM
The entire art class scene was super hot, especially how Sam's ass kept making it harder and harder for Marc to hold on, inadvertently leading to near sex between them right in class. I'll admit to hoping hoping they would fuck, but I'm guessing you're saving that for a future chapter. The descriptions of the sex in the bathroom, as well as Sam's reactions to it was super hot. I also loved how Marc was still there to make sure that Sam was okay. I like Marc a lot and want to see him have a happy ending. I grow more intrigued by the black suited people and that some of the teachers might know about the book. Or they at least know of magic being a thing. I do think the teacher angle is a little out of left field, but maybe there were hints I missed because of the heat in previous chapters. Guess I might have to go reread them. I'll also echo MonsterMash in that I enjoy that Sam's idea to keep himself straight continues to make himself gayer, while still thinking everything he does is only for straights. I'm also impressed by the last edit Sam made. It was remarkably smart and not made out of lust. I'm looking forward to finding out how this story is going to unfold. And what other sexy shenanigans Sam is going to find himself in.

8/27/21, 8:31 PM
Thanks for the detailed comments! They make writing silly smut worth it! @Proteus
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8/27/21, 7:53 PM
I absolutely love everything about this series, the build up is insane and every single scene is extremely hot. This has been my favorite series to read in years, keep up the amazing work!

8/27/21, 8:26 PM
Thanks! It definitely helps that I'm getting editing help and brainstorms from two people! @