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Aussiebtm97
8/25/21, 3:43 AM
perfection as usual!

8/27/21, 5:00 AM
@Aussiebtm97 Thank you!!! I'm in Melbourne btw ;)
8/25/21, 5:41 AM
The beauty of a slow-burn story is that it smolders so much hotter! The previous chapters were edging me so hard, the release in this chapter was incredible. And there's still so much further these two characters can go--or fall, depending on your perspective. I love this story so much! :D

8/27/21, 5:00 AM
@WolvenPuppy I read your message like three times hehe I'm so glad you enjoyed this and that you can see the beauty of a slow-burn story. It's not everyone's cup of tea but for those who enjoy it I think it means so much. Knowing the characters and empathizing. My idea is always to make it as real as possible so you guys can feel like you are there feeling that. It's hard to write a story with both perspectives and go on the same scenes from different sides but the result is amazing and I'm very happy you like it :D Thank you!
Island Jock
8/25/21, 5:31 PM
such a good read, the story is epic. The slow burn is great, and that Jax just accepts his fate is truely awesome. Showing that submission and humiliation can be just as pleasurable to the right individual. I tip my hat to you Sir!

8/27/21, 4:57 AM
@Island Jock Thanks a lot! Tell me if there's anything better than the slow burn? I think that these transformations are usually a lot hotter than the sex we portray. That's in the chemistry between the characters and how it evolves with time. Sex is important but it's just to cement what lies underneath it. Well, my humble opinion :)
8/26/21, 3:05 AM
really great, love your stories

8/27/21, 4:55 AM
@Wallace Thanks, my friend. Your feedback is always important :D
8/26/21, 4:03 AM
Quando uma Historia é tão quente, que faz com que cada sensação dos personagens consiga ser sentida por mim. épica demais, material perfeito para ser degustado aos poucos em varias leituras.

8/27/21, 4:54 AM
@Timdlv Valeu, cara. Eu queria conseguir escrever mais rapido e postar mais capitulos mas eh foda haha Valeu pelo apoio e por estar lah comigo no Twitter ;)
Mat
8/26/21, 8:37 PM
Just so fucking hot. Brian is the best writer.

8/27/21, 4:52 AM
@Mat You're great as always, my friend ;)
8/27/21, 2:11 AM
Great start! Eagerly anticipating the next chapter!
Aug 26, 2021
8/27/21, 12:37 AM
Good Story
8/26/21, 6:20 PM
Great chapter man. I enjoyed the sex and the edits, but the part that really got me was the sexual tension with Marc at the meeting. I think we've all been in that position, where we're sitting just a little too close to someone we're attracted to.

8/27/21, 12:34 AM
Thanks! Marc kind of worked his magic on me -- he was just supposed to be a minor irritation to Sam when I first started writing this story. @Derek Williams
Revenge
8/26/21, 2:48 PM
cant believe it took me this much to start reading this and when i started i just couldnt stop... its so GOOD!!!! it goes straight into my favorite stories section

8/27/21, 12:33 AM
Thanks! @Revenge