Recent Comments

8/26/21, 3:46 PM
"Will thought about it, but he was starting to sober up. He knew that was a bad idea. “No, that’s not worth the risk. Those spells could screw up your life.” Yep he just crossed the boundary from somewhat scheming to full on jerk. Will needs to be taken down. Hopefully Lee will realize he should have been nicer to Will but this doesn't justify what Will has done.
8/26/21, 1:50 PM
I’m really hating on Will. I really really really hope this backfires. Will becoming Lee’s big cocked slave would be really hot.
8/25/21, 3:25 AM
I was "sucked" into the story from the beginning. Your writing is so smooth that I had to read and read and wanted more. The characters were very well developed and I could visualize each of them as the action progressed. The sex was way hot and I could see myself watching in the bedroom as the men fucked, sucked and tongued holes (I only wish I was actually in the room). I was hard and leaking the whole time, which is why I gave you 5's in all categories. This is the first story I have read from you and I want to find more. Great story!

8/26/21, 12:28 PM
@MuscleSon69 Thank you So, SO much for your overwhelmingly lovely feedback! knowing that you could easily visualize the scenes, and that i succeeded in making my characters compelling to a larger audience than just myself is so vindicating! i hope you find more itels you enjoy in my written works!
8/25/21, 2:22 PM
Boy oh boy. Amazing story. I loved that Vincent wasn't outright evil. You don't see that often. The idea of "nudges" is perfect, you really start to pick up that something isn't right almost immediately. For me it was the scene about the report card. 😍😍

8/26/21, 12:24 PM
@Norismo striking a balance between 'something weird is going on here' and 'everything is COMPLETELY normal, what are you talking about?' was a vibe i wanted to shift between as smoothly as possible. thankfully it looks like i did it correctly. thanks for your wonderful feedback!
The_Supernatural_D
8/26/21, 11:15 AM
Hope you write a part two!
nycboot
8/26/21, 6:53 AM
@autoDream I hope you haven't given up on Jese....
Horny
8/26/21, 4:55 AM
It'd be funny if this blew up in Will's face and he became his big cocked slave
8/24/21, 8:11 PM
Finally getting back to this story and catching up on it now that a new chapter has been added and I love this chapter. Sam's experience getting a self-lubricating butt and really enjoying it is hitting many of my buttons, and I'm not surprised to see Nutiper was involved in this chapter based on that alone. I also like the relationship between Gabe and Sam, as well as their differences re: Gabe being generally thoughtful about the changes and Sam being VERY impulsive. I'm gonna keep reading and see what happens from here on.

Nutiper
8/25/21, 2:16 AM
@Proteus Ooooh I *do* have a yen for butts, though I will say that the entire self-lubricating butts concept and edit was 100% all Blue, haha. If you haven't already, you might enjoy checking out his earlier story, "Pan-Galactic Human Fan Club"! It's still in-progress and has a few chapters to go before it's completed, but it has a *lot* of really fun and hot stuff in it, including some hyper-sensitive butts... plus some other things too...

8/26/21, 1:47 AM
@Nutiper Thanks for the recommendation. I spent a good chunk of today reading it, and I'm thoroughly enjoying it. Super fun, and super hot aliens.

Nutiper
8/26/21, 4:11 AM
@Proteus Oh you are *very* welcome and I am glad you liked it! And I totally agree with your assessment — *fun* and *hot* are great words for it, ha. I am excited for the eventual final chapters!
8/26/21, 3:58 AM
I've got a soft spot for diaper pups. . . Well, a hard spot now.😉
8/26/21, 3:15 AM
This does feel like a chapter of a larger story (maybe the last chapter? But could be something intermediate). Anyway, it's hot. The world needs more diaper pups.