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8/25/21, 11:37 PM
I could accept that Vincent nudged Dylan's father too hard and had to take care of him for life but he did not have to make Dylan his lover. I somehow doubt Dylan would have chosen to be Vincent's lover. So Vincent crossed the line of accidental mind control to deliberate misuse of his power. Dylan is his thrall no higher in status than his dad. There is no point to this control. Dylan is not and never was property for his dad to sign over. As they say "absolute power corrupts absolutely." Vincent is rotting inside. As a specific comment about the writing: the change in Dylan from confused son to willing fuckboy happened too fast.

8/26/21, 2:35 AM
@Cutlerfan thank you for sharing your thoughts on my story. you are right that Vincent is a horrible abuser of power here and is violating the autonomy of the Prince family utterly. he is, in his very dialog, both admitting that he is abusing his power over them, and gaslighting himself into believing that he is not morally wrong here. everything that Vincent does, and by extention Peter too, is shaded on that skewed mentality, and its a logical fallacy of the most obvious kind. i did not write vincent to be a paragon of good moral standing. and seeing some of the more passionate commentary sounding angry or disgusted with Vincents actions tell me that i did a good job of writing him as antagonist. as to the comment that the transformation happened too fast, that's the nature of the nudge that Vincent gave him. for longer mental transformations perhaps you would enjoy my story 'The Dragon Lord' where much of the story is based strictly in the mental alteration process. thanks for the !comment

8/26/21, 3:38 PM
@Mind Labyrinth A great reply. I failed to realize that Vincent had advanced from nudges to full domination ability. I'm glad you weren't trying to make him actually an okay guy. One question I have is that what happens when Vincent dies one day. Is his mental control freed from his victims or have they been so thoroughly mind fucked by that point there is no going back? Just curious. I've been considering long term effects of mind control in stories.

8/26/21, 10:42 PM
@Cutlerfan from the rules i assigned Vincent's powers, his abilities are ro be able to read other people's minds, and also to insert his own ideas into those minds as higher priority input than what used to be there. for the most part he doesnt use much of his power at once, just nudging people this way or that way. this is why he thinks of his power as nudging, but he is able to forcably insert foregin ideas no matter the magnitude, with no backlash. with this idea, vincents abilities do not fade when he dies. now, peter will very likely have passed on by this point, so he will be fine. dylan on the other hand i see as the eternal widower, mourning the loss of the love of his life, and living on to the best way he can because that is what vincent would have wanted.
Anonymous
8/26/21, 9:30 PM
Will saying the words and ending up as the service top here would be great. Though if he has to obey Lee, Lee would probably get his length back. Maybe he should just be the small dicked bottom
Jun 4, 2016
7/28/18, 4:48 PM
I loved this! Does anyone have a link to the story mentioned earlier? “Change of truths” on Fur Affinity?

lefty616
8/26/21, 6:42 PM
@MonsterMash62 Found it! http://www.furrypowah.com/2018/11/a-change-of-truths.html?zx=2d0f7e31a9458727

8/26/21, 7:27 PM
Wow. That was fast and intense. I’m not usually into furry stuff but that is hot. @lefty616
8/26/21, 3:46 PM
"Will thought about it, but he was starting to sober up. He knew that was a bad idea. “No, that’s not worth the risk. Those spells could screw up your life.” Yep he just crossed the boundary from somewhat scheming to full on jerk. Will needs to be taken down. Hopefully Lee will realize he should have been nicer to Will but this doesn't justify what Will has done.
8/26/21, 1:50 PM
I’m really hating on Will. I really really really hope this backfires. Will becoming Lee’s big cocked slave would be really hot.
8/25/21, 3:25 AM
I was "sucked" into the story from the beginning. Your writing is so smooth that I had to read and read and wanted more. The characters were very well developed and I could visualize each of them as the action progressed. The sex was way hot and I could see myself watching in the bedroom as the men fucked, sucked and tongued holes (I only wish I was actually in the room). I was hard and leaking the whole time, which is why I gave you 5's in all categories. This is the first story I have read from you and I want to find more. Great story!

8/26/21, 12:28 PM
@MuscleSon69 Thank you So, SO much for your overwhelmingly lovely feedback! knowing that you could easily visualize the scenes, and that i succeeded in making my characters compelling to a larger audience than just myself is so vindicating! i hope you find more itels you enjoy in my written works!
8/25/21, 2:22 PM
Boy oh boy. Amazing story. I loved that Vincent wasn't outright evil. You don't see that often. The idea of "nudges" is perfect, you really start to pick up that something isn't right almost immediately. For me it was the scene about the report card. 😍😍

8/26/21, 12:24 PM
@Norismo striking a balance between 'something weird is going on here' and 'everything is COMPLETELY normal, what are you talking about?' was a vibe i wanted to shift between as smoothly as possible. thankfully it looks like i did it correctly. thanks for your wonderful feedback!
The_Supernatural_D
8/26/21, 11:15 AM
Hope you write a part two!
nycboot
8/26/21, 6:53 AM
@autoDream I hope you haven't given up on Jese....
Horny
8/26/21, 4:55 AM
It'd be funny if this blew up in Will's face and he became his big cocked slave