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Oct 29, 2025
11/6/25, 9:37 PM
Agree liked the story and would like to read more of it
11/6/25, 9:21 PM
I came so hard reading this. Genuinely shouted THIS ORGASM BROUGHT TO YOU BY MASTER HYPNOTIST MICHAEL MARTINEZ!!!” what a great story! So hot. Cannot wait to see if we get a private performance xx
11/6/25, 8:08 PM
This is getting interesting...
11/6/25, 5:17 PM
Thanks for yet another hot story! Looking forward to future ones.

11/6/25, 7:29 PM
@[11037](/user/show/13616) Me too! I wish I could clone myself so they'd be a surprise! (Though I guess it's pretty fun writing them ;) )
11/6/25, 6:03 PM
*Très sympa*!!!!:heart_eyes: ça fait plaisir de voir des histoires en Français sur le site de temps en temps, et c'était une approche intéressante aux thèmes.:heartbeat:
11/6/25, 5:15 PM
Hot!!!!:heart_eyes::heart_eyes:
11/6/25, 4:27 PM
Very cool and interesting story! Awesome!:green_heart:
11/6/25, 9:49 AM
Great first chapter, it creates a sense of mystery and a lot of questions about what's going on. I hope future chapters will answer all the questions. The story's beginning is pretty good, even very good 👍. I have a question: is this already a written story? Or is it being written and published only here? I also liked that you started with Green Lantern Hal Jordan. Perhaps when he's broken and rebuilt, he'll help with other goals. But other heroes should notice the disappearance of Hal Jordan and his ring, especially on Oa, where the Guardians may have suspicions about the changes in Hal Jordan (and they can act covertly) so as not to arouse the suspicions of the new Hal Jordan, who will obey his master.

11/6/25, 4:26 PM
@[Zander-1](/user/show/10015044) Thanks, Z. Not all written out yet but I know where I’m headed. It’s only here—this is my first story. Your comments make sense—I will get to his absence in part 2 or 3.
11/6/25, 7:49 AM
looking forward to the next chapter

11/6/25, 4:24 PM
@[RedEnd](/user/show/10001787) Thanks!