Recent Comments

9/20/25, 5:17 PM
Hey! I'm a hypnosis filemaker on Patreon/across other services and I loooove this story. Really struck a chord with me, I revisit it often. I've been wanting to do a file inspired by it for a bit; would you mind if I did so and credited you/linked to your work as the source of the idea? It'd broadly be a Size Queen-ification file drawing from some of the motifs here. :)

9/21/25, 6:03 PM
@[Jockout](/user/show/10022972) Hey there! Thanks for asking ahead of time, I really appreciate it! I wouldn't mind it (and in fact, am flattered!) based on a few conditions, if that's okay. Pretty much, if the file riffs on things from the story but does a lot of its own material, then I'm totally fine with it if you just credit and link! Though, if the file turns out to be more a verbatim transcription of the story into a file, then I'd ask that you not charge Patrons for that, and instead provide it as something free of charge. Does that make sense? (Also I'd ask for a copy of the file when it's done, too! 😊 Would be very neat to hear it either way!)

9/21/25, 8:49 PM
@[Nu and the Nus](/user/show/25270) Sounds perfect! It'd lean more towards the former (original file riffing off the story) for sure. Would it be OK if I emailed you about this, just to spare more comments on the story haha?

9/21/25, 9:24 PM
@[Jockout](/user/show/10022972) Yeah of course! My e-mail is [redacted 😉]
9/21/25, 8:55 PM
Love this and all your stories!! Can’t wait for you to write more!!
9/21/25, 6:37 PM
Still hoping to see the mistaken command Kyle gave Gabe for Gabe to use any trick to control people to let Gabe take control of Zeke..... love plans that are hijacked by someone for their nefarious benefit 😊
Oct 5, 2006
Anonymous
9/21/25, 6:02 PM
very nice story should continue

9/21/25, 6:03 PM
@Anonymous It did see comment above.
9/20/25, 10:55 PM
Fantastic!

9/20/25, 11:27 PM
@[Nocturne13](/user/show/263497) Why, thank you!

9/21/25, 4:42 PM
@[KiwiScribe](/user/show/10046789) Actually let me give you a more specific comment. One thing that I particularly liked in this story is that you acknowledge that the orc's dick was anatomically too much for a human being, and you included a transformation effect to make the human able to be a good cock sleeve. Not even just an anal stretch but an oral transformation as well. This is really important to me because when this detail gets left out of stories like this, it pulls me out of it. Plus I think this kind of subtle transformation that enables fantasy sex to happen is sexy. Well that's why I had an element like that in Sex and Cantrip/The Third Key.

9/21/25, 5:12 PM
@[Nocturne13](/user/show/263497) I appreciate the detailed comment! Specific feedback is always something that I really enjoy reading, because it lets me know exactly what I’m doing right. I’m happy that you enjoyed the subtle transformation aspect of my story. Like you said, I knew that with the proportions I gave the orc, I couldn’t have him just have sex with a human. I thought that I could make the transformation aspect pretty hot and I knew it would make things more feasible. I’m happy you thought it was a good inclusion!
9/21/25, 12:38 AM
Super HOT

9/21/25, 4:59 PM
@[Maxigay](/user/show/524184) Hehe, that’s the goal. Glad you think so!
Dec 30, 2006
Peanut
9/21/25, 3:53 PM
I wish that site was real XD
9/21/25, 5:17 AM
“_But if you say one more word right now, I will take you to the nearest gas station and have you pumped full of air until you pop!_“ Um…wouldn’t that kill him….? “ _The car comes to a screeching halt at a gas station_…………. ” That was painful to read. There’s uncomfortable, and then there is watching abuse play out. I think I’ll be more careful of the stories I click on here from now on.

9/21/25, 3:16 PM
@[Null0byte](/user/show/210784) Thanks for the feedback, sweetheart. Really means a lot to me.
Tomatillo Hot
9/15/25, 9:04 PM
Cute story, hombre

9/21/25, 3:15 PM
@Tomatillo Hot Thanks, boss, really glad you enjoyed it.
9/15/25, 8:38 PM
:rofl: I love their chemistry

9/21/25, 3:15 PM
@[Ggg-22](/user/show/10044424) Thanks, man. I'm glad you liked it.