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1/20/26, 12:19 AM
That explains some of what happened last chapter. Other then Henry's sudden poor performance, the disguised Hank was a great play. And that 'key into the hole' part was amazing. With Henry getting owned - again. Seriously, Nick and Henry keep jumping back and forth over the fence. Not saying this negatively. But these two boys have such a knack for getting completely morphed into eager slaves while also having a drive for personal independence and responsibility. Maybe Hank can finally give them that 'choice'? Also I can't help but feel that Violet seems to becoming a new version of Tri-Hard. His ego and smug superiority are having too great an influence. Even if he says he is doing what he does for his master; its clearly self-centered on his goals. Pride before the fall and all. This will likely really throw a wrench in Hank's plans. I second what was said earlier that this has quite a few Inception vides. And in layers. Yet is Nick in the mindscape or is he physically trying to find Violets actual body? And how is Henry having so many copies of himself that have powers when his original is gone?

1/20/26, 2:52 AM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) So, just to clarify, the mental echo of Henry in Joe's head doesn't _actually_ have any powers (something that might be relevant soon,...), but he IS a copy of Henry's mind from before he lost his powers. Joe can mimic Henry's powers (same as the drones/signal), but it takes having this version of Henry in his head like a blueprint to show him how. That's why 'Henry' needed to lean on Joe to defend him (and vice versa). As for Cameron,... yes, he might be getting a little full of himself again. He's supposed to be 'sleeping' so he can focus the greater part of his mental abilities on keeping **H-3** from taking over,... but his ego is slipping back in now he has space in Henry's head to spread his own thoughts into. Oh, and Nick _is_ in the mindscape/network,... somewhere. Think of him as the heroes' outlet right now, while Joe is the wiring connecting them. His parts are all in the next chapter. I hope that clears some things up, without too any spoilers. Thank you for reading! :3

2/2/26, 2:58 AM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) It does. Thank you. Though I am curious how many more chapters are you imagining for this series? You are one shy from matching the first saga, and this clearly has a bit longer to go.

2/2/26, 11:52 AM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) I would answer, but I'm always wrong about these things XD "Not too many more" is my closest estimate,...
2/2/26, 3:36 AM
I'm being a Good Boy for HIM right now. This story is incredibly hot.

2/2/26, 10:59 AM
@[Pwrliftermscl](/user/show/941605) You good boys get *worse* 😈
2/2/26, 7:02 AM
At this point, I'd rather let Liam got someone else and Noah got punish :P Dylan could work.
Anonymous
2/2/26, 6:26 AM
Loved this its as great as always!! Hope for more soon!
2/2/26, 1:44 AM
I found this to be quite engaging; scent-based hypnosis/conditioning is always fun, although personally, for moi, a little cigar imagery goes a long way (I can see how it works for others, however)...
2/2/26, 12:39 AM
Jesus! Horny tale, enhanced by proper writing - so jealous of the guys involved!

2/2/26, 12:40 AM
@[ex-top](/user/show/932298) Thank you!
2/1/26, 11:51 PM
This is quickly becoming a favorite series for me

2/2/26, 12:30 AM
@[texas95](/user/show/10020267) Thank you; it always inspires me to write more when I know people are enjoying it!
2/2/26, 12:08 AM
I actually began with the chapter after this one, and had to double back. Now, with this new context, I may have to alter my ratings! Hot!!!
Anonymous
2/1/26, 11:56 PM
Is this the end of the story or there will be another chapter? Hope to hear from you soon.
2/1/26, 2:11 AM
What I most loved about this, beside the wrestling stuff which I'll always love, was the descriptions of what they were going to do to Luke, the two choices they gave him, either way of which would make him a slut: one, their private slut, the other, their public one. And then the choice was made for him. So hot!

2/1/26, 2:03 PM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) I agree! that part was fantastic! The struggle with the decision was so good. Also, I love all the references to the smells ... the pheromone elements work for me!

2/1/26, 11:48 PM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) This is where it starts to get wild