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8/25/21, 7:51 PM
AMAZING new chapter! I love the fixes to Sam's selfish brojob edit and the slow spiral he's on toward just straight up wanting to be gay. The dance around putting him and Marc together is masterful, and I can't wait to see all the changes on the way there. Personally, I'm enjoying the way their constant horniness is getting the better of them and leading them to make poorly thought out edits. I wouldn't mind a mix of occasional smarter edits thrown in, but I'm absolutely on board for horny college bros letting their dicks and butts do the thinking for them ;)

8/26/21, 2:29 AM
Thanks! I originally had more Marc in this chapter, but it got too long so I split it into two chapters. I have a mix of dumb horny edits and at least *moderately* clever changes planned for future chapters. @Curiosity
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8/25/21, 9:44 PM
I am a bit sad for Kyle so I hope he gets a happy or at least an ending he will enjoy. Anyway I am curious at what will happen to John... As for possible Young Justice fic seeing Superboy get mindfucked would be pretty great. Lots of psychological weaknesses to fuck him up with like his inferiority to full blood kryptonian, his nature as a clone, telepaths fucking with his mind in the past, whatever trigger words implanted by cadmus which are still left in his mind...

8/26/21, 1:39 AM
@ Hello, buddy! I agree, I'm feeling a bit sad for Kyle too, but I'm thinking in some ideas and there's still a long way in front of us, just be patient and see what happens. And about John, we'll see some of him in the next chapter, to fully appear on chapter 13. I've been thinking on a Young Justice story since RedEnd mentioned it and I have some ideas, I'm considering to set it in the same universe that this story. I agree with you, Superboy's mind is a great field for play in. If you have some suggestions or ideas, send me a message and I'd be delighted to talk about it. Thanks for reading, buddy!
8/25/21, 3:04 AM
This was really well done but ultimately a horror story. Vincent is a monster.

8/25/21, 4:19 AM
@amul you are entirely right, this is a horror story, but i hope it was a fascinating read either way.

8/25/21, 10:56 AM
@Mind Labyrinth You are a talented writer! I'm glad it was intentional horror.

8/25/21, 8:01 PM
@amul Nearly every one of the stories on this site involves a monster. It's part of the genre.

8/26/21, 12:57 AM
@bak2jak @amul . bak2jak is pretty much correct. the nature of mind control, brainwashing, supernatural powers is sometimes very positive, but rarely so when handed to humans who are by our nature, flawed. as soon as consent is either bypassed or actively declined, the story becomes a horror. but again, look at the site we're on. Isn't this pretty much what we're all here for? its actually part of the reason why i suspect Martin-sama the almighty site owner decided to split off a sister site JUST for romances. the overlap sometimes makes readers dissatisfied if they were or were not looking for a morally dubious or outrightly immoral story.
8/25/21, 11:25 PM
Holy fuck dude, good job.

8/26/21, 12:37 AM
Thanks! Nutiper and MonsterMash62 really helped me punch up this chapter! @Dace
8/6/21, 7:43 PM
Plot twist! This is a *delight*, and make no mistake. Can't wait for the next instalment.

8/26/21, 12:35 AM
Thanks! I've probably been too ambitious in trying to juggle three multi-part stories all at the same time. @Noam de Pluma
8/6/21, 6:17 PM
5's across the board, man. The way you place us so firmly in Charley's head and yet make it perfectly clear what's happening to him beyond his perception is fantastic, plus the blowjob was just ludicriously hot. And I second Nutiper; the idea that just thinking about butt play pushed him over the edge was a lovely touch. Loving this series!

8/26/21, 12:34 AM
Wow, thanks! @Noam de Pluma
8/25/21, 9:56 PM
Wow. I love the new intrigue that was firmly introduced in this chapter (but also hinted at elsewhere in the series). I'm hoping this doesn't go in a too sinister direction, though. I like the lightness of this story, with just a touch of sinister. That being said, this chapter was just as hot as the rest, and I couldn't help but laugh at the calibration sounding like being at an eye doctor getting your prescription checked. It does sound like maybe this fan club is basically the alien version of Furries. I dig it. Honestly I dig this whole story, and I'm eager to learn what Yan has in store for Charley.

8/26/21, 12:33 AM
Thanks for reading and commenting! It definitely helps keep me writing. Next chapter is in drafts, but I'm hyper-focused on the "Edits" story for the time being. @Proteus
8/25/21, 9:34 PM
Man, pheromones and musk are a newer kink of mine, and your descriptions of Zethro's are brilliant. Great job with that. I also like how Zethro was just able to dematerialize his pants. It makes me wonder if the aliens are actually wearing clothes, or if they are nude but allowing Charley to imagine them in clothing. Also the flashlight is a nice touch, as well as the description of Crage using his long tongue in it. You write so well. Definitely ranking as one of my favorite authors on the site.

8/26/21, 12:31 AM
Thanks! The aliens *are* wearing clothes, although that's a fun idea! It's certainly within their ability to just program Charley so he sees clothes where there aren't any. @Proteus
8/25/21, 11:42 PM
A great start. I love reality changing stories, especially if the people 'changed' are unaware of how they have changed & when the person changing his reality effects unintended results [penis shrinking,, male to 'sissy', nice guy to nasty, 'fem, to 'butch', extreme cum or pre-cum] & obviously change of sexual orientation. I also enjoy a persons previous 'memorie's' being changed so their current behaviors seem normal. Can't wait for part 2 !!
8/25/21, 10:42 PM
As an aside when I read this story I couldn't help but think that the dude sold the game. Especially as he wasn't super rich or have a harem or anything like that - he was seemingly middle class. I'm not sure what that says for our main guy, but it does hint at something.

8/25/21, 11:12 PM
@Heru Kane maybe the game is a test of character, if you fail, all the changes are undone, if you pass, you get to keep the changes?