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nycboot
8/26/21, 6:53 AM
@autoDream I hope you haven't given up on Jese....
Horny
8/26/21, 4:55 AM
It'd be funny if this blew up in Will's face and he became his big cocked slave
8/24/21, 8:11 PM
Finally getting back to this story and catching up on it now that a new chapter has been added and I love this chapter. Sam's experience getting a self-lubricating butt and really enjoying it is hitting many of my buttons, and I'm not surprised to see Nutiper was involved in this chapter based on that alone. I also like the relationship between Gabe and Sam, as well as their differences re: Gabe being generally thoughtful about the changes and Sam being VERY impulsive. I'm gonna keep reading and see what happens from here on.

Nutiper
8/25/21, 2:16 AM
@Proteus Ooooh I *do* have a yen for butts, though I will say that the entire self-lubricating butts concept and edit was 100% all Blue, haha. If you haven't already, you might enjoy checking out his earlier story, "Pan-Galactic Human Fan Club"! It's still in-progress and has a few chapters to go before it's completed, but it has a *lot* of really fun and hot stuff in it, including some hyper-sensitive butts... plus some other things too...

8/26/21, 1:47 AM
@Nutiper Thanks for the recommendation. I spent a good chunk of today reading it, and I'm thoroughly enjoying it. Super fun, and super hot aliens.

Nutiper
8/26/21, 4:11 AM
@Proteus Oh you are *very* welcome and I am glad you liked it! And I totally agree with your assessment — *fun* and *hot* are great words for it, ha. I am excited for the eventual final chapters!
8/26/21, 3:58 AM
I've got a soft spot for diaper pups. . . Well, a hard spot now.😉
8/26/21, 3:15 AM
This does feel like a chapter of a larger story (maybe the last chapter? But could be something intermediate). Anyway, it's hot. The world needs more diaper pups.
8/25/21, 7:51 PM
AMAZING new chapter! I love the fixes to Sam's selfish brojob edit and the slow spiral he's on toward just straight up wanting to be gay. The dance around putting him and Marc together is masterful, and I can't wait to see all the changes on the way there. Personally, I'm enjoying the way their constant horniness is getting the better of them and leading them to make poorly thought out edits. I wouldn't mind a mix of occasional smarter edits thrown in, but I'm absolutely on board for horny college bros letting their dicks and butts do the thinking for them ;)

8/26/21, 2:29 AM
Thanks! I originally had more Marc in this chapter, but it got too long so I split it into two chapters. I have a mix of dumb horny edits and at least *moderately* clever changes planned for future chapters. @Curiosity
Anonymous
8/25/21, 9:44 PM
I am a bit sad for Kyle so I hope he gets a happy or at least an ending he will enjoy. Anyway I am curious at what will happen to John... As for possible Young Justice fic seeing Superboy get mindfucked would be pretty great. Lots of psychological weaknesses to fuck him up with like his inferiority to full blood kryptonian, his nature as a clone, telepaths fucking with his mind in the past, whatever trigger words implanted by cadmus which are still left in his mind...

8/26/21, 1:39 AM
@ Hello, buddy! I agree, I'm feeling a bit sad for Kyle too, but I'm thinking in some ideas and there's still a long way in front of us, just be patient and see what happens. And about John, we'll see some of him in the next chapter, to fully appear on chapter 13. I've been thinking on a Young Justice story since RedEnd mentioned it and I have some ideas, I'm considering to set it in the same universe that this story. I agree with you, Superboy's mind is a great field for play in. If you have some suggestions or ideas, send me a message and I'd be delighted to talk about it. Thanks for reading, buddy!
8/25/21, 3:04 AM
This was really well done but ultimately a horror story. Vincent is a monster.

8/25/21, 4:19 AM
@amul you are entirely right, this is a horror story, but i hope it was a fascinating read either way.

8/25/21, 10:56 AM
@Mind Labyrinth You are a talented writer! I'm glad it was intentional horror.

8/25/21, 8:01 PM
@amul Nearly every one of the stories on this site involves a monster. It's part of the genre.

8/26/21, 12:57 AM
@bak2jak @amul . bak2jak is pretty much correct. the nature of mind control, brainwashing, supernatural powers is sometimes very positive, but rarely so when handed to humans who are by our nature, flawed. as soon as consent is either bypassed or actively declined, the story becomes a horror. but again, look at the site we're on. Isn't this pretty much what we're all here for? its actually part of the reason why i suspect Martin-sama the almighty site owner decided to split off a sister site JUST for romances. the overlap sometimes makes readers dissatisfied if they were or were not looking for a morally dubious or outrightly immoral story.
8/25/21, 11:25 PM
Holy fuck dude, good job.

8/26/21, 12:37 AM
Thanks! Nutiper and MonsterMash62 really helped me punch up this chapter! @Dace
8/6/21, 7:43 PM
Plot twist! This is a *delight*, and make no mistake. Can't wait for the next instalment.

8/26/21, 12:35 AM
Thanks! I've probably been too ambitious in trying to juggle three multi-part stories all at the same time. @Noam de Pluma