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8/6/21, 7:43 PM
Plot twist! This is a *delight*, and make no mistake. Can't wait for the next instalment.

8/26/21, 12:35 AM
Thanks! I've probably been too ambitious in trying to juggle three multi-part stories all at the same time. @Noam de Pluma
8/6/21, 6:17 PM
5's across the board, man. The way you place us so firmly in Charley's head and yet make it perfectly clear what's happening to him beyond his perception is fantastic, plus the blowjob was just ludicriously hot. And I second Nutiper; the idea that just thinking about butt play pushed him over the edge was a lovely touch. Loving this series!

8/26/21, 12:34 AM
Wow, thanks! @Noam de Pluma
8/25/21, 9:56 PM
Wow. I love the new intrigue that was firmly introduced in this chapter (but also hinted at elsewhere in the series). I'm hoping this doesn't go in a too sinister direction, though. I like the lightness of this story, with just a touch of sinister. That being said, this chapter was just as hot as the rest, and I couldn't help but laugh at the calibration sounding like being at an eye doctor getting your prescription checked. It does sound like maybe this fan club is basically the alien version of Furries. I dig it. Honestly I dig this whole story, and I'm eager to learn what Yan has in store for Charley.

8/26/21, 12:33 AM
Thanks for reading and commenting! It definitely helps keep me writing. Next chapter is in drafts, but I'm hyper-focused on the "Edits" story for the time being. @Proteus
8/25/21, 9:34 PM
Man, pheromones and musk are a newer kink of mine, and your descriptions of Zethro's are brilliant. Great job with that. I also like how Zethro was just able to dematerialize his pants. It makes me wonder if the aliens are actually wearing clothes, or if they are nude but allowing Charley to imagine them in clothing. Also the flashlight is a nice touch, as well as the description of Crage using his long tongue in it. You write so well. Definitely ranking as one of my favorite authors on the site.

8/26/21, 12:31 AM
Thanks! The aliens *are* wearing clothes, although that's a fun idea! It's certainly within their ability to just program Charley so he sees clothes where there aren't any. @Proteus
8/25/21, 11:42 PM
A great start. I love reality changing stories, especially if the people 'changed' are unaware of how they have changed & when the person changing his reality effects unintended results [penis shrinking,, male to 'sissy', nice guy to nasty, 'fem, to 'butch', extreme cum or pre-cum] & obviously change of sexual orientation. I also enjoy a persons previous 'memorie's' being changed so their current behaviors seem normal. Can't wait for part 2 !!
8/25/21, 10:42 PM
As an aside when I read this story I couldn't help but think that the dude sold the game. Especially as he wasn't super rich or have a harem or anything like that - he was seemingly middle class. I'm not sure what that says for our main guy, but it does hint at something.

8/25/21, 11:12 PM
@Heru Kane maybe the game is a test of character, if you fail, all the changes are undone, if you pass, you get to keep the changes?
8/25/21, 10:32 PM
Very interested in where you'll take this. So many avenues that you've opened. I was impressed the lad had a desktop, let alone a working disc drive
8/25/21, 9:09 PM
I LOVE the description of Tyzon's body from Charley's perspective. You do a wonderful job of painting that picture that I can see it incredibly clearly. Also, I want a bathroom that I can change to look like anything, like the holodeck from Star Trek.
8/25/21, 8:26 PM
Well dang! This chapter is even hotter than the last one! Like the other commenters have said, the twist on dumbing down is great. I like that it was almost like Tyzon's dick knew that Charley was thinking of a big word that it throbbed. Very nice touch. The one thing I was a little confused about was if Tyzon was making his cock bigger or if it was just him adjusting Charley's perception of it. Maybe it was both. Either way, this is by no means a complaint. Simply a musing on my part.
8/25/21, 8:10 PM
I came here on the suggestion of Nutiper and I'm really enjoying this this story. It took me a few chapters to really get into it, but the muscle worship on this is what made me decide to comment. I love the subtlety of the mental transformation and just how playful it is. Well done!