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8/25/21, 10:32 PM
Very interested in where you'll take this. So many avenues that you've opened. I was impressed the lad had a desktop, let alone a working disc drive
8/25/21, 9:09 PM
I LOVE the description of Tyzon's body from Charley's perspective. You do a wonderful job of painting that picture that I can see it incredibly clearly. Also, I want a bathroom that I can change to look like anything, like the holodeck from Star Trek.
8/25/21, 8:26 PM
Well dang! This chapter is even hotter than the last one! Like the other commenters have said, the twist on dumbing down is great. I like that it was almost like Tyzon's dick knew that Charley was thinking of a big word that it throbbed. Very nice touch. The one thing I was a little confused about was if Tyzon was making his cock bigger or if it was just him adjusting Charley's perception of it. Maybe it was both. Either way, this is by no means a complaint. Simply a musing on my part.
8/25/21, 8:10 PM
I came here on the suggestion of Nutiper and I'm really enjoying this this story. It took me a few chapters to really get into it, but the muscle worship on this is what made me decide to comment. I love the subtlety of the mental transformation and just how playful it is. Well done!
Anonymous
8/25/21, 6:50 PM
Very good, fun read. Would absolutely love a sequel/prequel.
Jim
8/25/21, 6:44 PM
woof! very hot big bro :)
Redpen88
8/25/21, 5:42 PM
Always a fan of this archetype. This shows good promise for the category and style. can't wait for the next chapter!
8/25/21, 5:30 PM
Love this series man. I hope we find out about Billy and Gavin's fate (and maybe Bruce and Chuck too if they weren't part of the larger group already taken care of).
Good Barkley
8/25/21, 2:56 PM
I loved the start to this story. then how it progressed. I was wondering if I would love to be Barkley, for a short time, so free of all worries and so eager to Play. so all in All, I loved it, so thanks
8/25/21, 2:34 PM
Brilliant story really enjoyed it like I do all of yours . Gotta agree with Math_Reez would be good to have a second part with a before and after .