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8/25/21, 3:15 AM
Interesting. I wonder, hope really, how he will go gay. I do hope he keeps control and stays smart. That saud, so far, this is interesting.
8/25/21, 2:20 AM
great start! looking forward for more
8/24/21, 10:08 PM
Well, hot damn. This is, by far, the hottest chapter so far. Especially the end with the new edits both Sam and Gabe did. Gabe's edit to make apology blowjobs fun for Sam, too, was a nice touch and brought his character back to being more like the other chapters. Sam making an edit to himself to be a fantastic sex partner for anyone made me incredibly turned on at the end of this chapter. Especially the part where he flexed each butt cheek separately. Woof. A few minor things to point out, though. The paragraph starting with "Gabe moaned "Ah fuck, Sam..."" was repeated and that threw me off a little as I was reading. There were also a couple times in this and previous chapters where the textbook was referred to as a notebook. It made it a little confusing. Other things I liked: Everything about Marc, and Sam inadvertently turning him on. Sam admitting he blocked Marc, and then giving in and trying to get a good word put in with Melanie. The man in black being at the GSA meeting. I really want to know more about him. I mean, really, this whole chapter was top notch. I'm looking forward to seeing what other antics Sam and Gabe will get into. Really great world building, great sex scenes, and fantastic characterizations. I can't say enough about how much I'm enjoying this story.

8/24/21, 11:51 PM
Thanks for the feedback! I might go back and tidy up mentions to "notebooks" at some point, but I've done so much editing the past week or so I need a bit of a break! @Proteus

8/25/21, 1:27 AM
@bluesuedewho I don't blame you. This was a lot of story to edit, and you deserve a break from it!
SC Walker
8/24/21, 10:39 PM
Just Fantastic!! My favorite story on here by far. The relationship between Sam and Gabe is so hot but also wholesome. The sex scenes are so descriptive and intense. The anticipation to see Sam finally get fucked is killing me but I know the wait is gonna be worth it.

8/24/21, 11:49 PM
Thanks! I came across some erotic media over the last year or so that kind of opened my eyes to the possibility of stuff that is both playful but also pushes the right kink buttons for me. @SC Walker

SC Walker
8/25/21, 12:52 AM
I'd really appreciate if you could share some of your inspiration! Your stories have unlocked some new kinks for me too. @bluesuedewho

8/25/21, 1:05 AM
It was lots of little things that built up, but the biggest influence was probably my discovery of audio roleplay? I'd never heard of it before, but there were some clips that mixed emotional depth, fun tone, and then hot sex. Most of them were straight erotica, to be honest. No idea how the algorithm directed me there! I *do* remember that the video that pushed me in the direction was this SFW gay audio roleplay https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XQFtn1rsrMA&t=1s&ab_channel=ASMRGav and then I just started googling and found a whole new world of erotica. @SC Walker
8/24/21, 8:31 PM
Glad this is back. this chapter was very fun. Loved trying to figure out exactly what the changes were before the reveal.

8/25/21, 12:23 AM
Thanks! I'm glad the guessing was fun! @Cadek
Anonymous
8/24/21, 11:57 PM
great work
8/24/21, 9:08 PM
This chapter was just as hot as the last chapter, but I do kind of agree with some of the earlier posters that said that Gabe's attitude seemed to have changed. It's clear that it must have seemed darker in an earlier version, and it's clear that it's better now. But I do hope we haven't lost the fun Gabe just because he's a dom top now. That being said, I'm digging the looser restrictions on heterosexuality that Sam is editing into this reality. It makes me think that maybe if actual reality were like that, maybe things would be better.
Martin
8/24/21, 9:00 PM
Man this chapter is amazing! Really! And it's so romantic, it SCREAMS Cupid!
8/24/21, 8:49 PM
I’m enjoying this. Will is turning into an unforgivable asshole. I like it when the bad guy wins, but only when I didn’t start sympathizing with them. I could sort of sympathize with Will in the beginning. I’d kind of like him to figure out a spell to make Lee forget how things were before. Even hotter would be if Will did that, and enjoyed the new world order, and then if Lee figured it out and turned the tables :)
8/24/21, 7:08 PM
I am beyond glad to see this return! This is easily the most hot story I've read, and I have been aching to see more chapters of this. This is an incredible chapter in the story! I love the slow, slow changes that happen. I'm starting to imaging the "dick" will start to start having pre come out his mouth at random times throughout his day, of have his muscles pump hard when his bro gets hard and horny. you are such an incredible writer and i'm so gald to see this back