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8/24/21, 8:31 PM
Glad this is back. this chapter was very fun. Loved trying to figure out exactly what the changes were before the reveal.

8/25/21, 12:23 AM
Thanks! I'm glad the guessing was fun! @Cadek
Anonymous
8/24/21, 11:57 PM
great work
8/24/21, 9:08 PM
This chapter was just as hot as the last chapter, but I do kind of agree with some of the earlier posters that said that Gabe's attitude seemed to have changed. It's clear that it must have seemed darker in an earlier version, and it's clear that it's better now. But I do hope we haven't lost the fun Gabe just because he's a dom top now. That being said, I'm digging the looser restrictions on heterosexuality that Sam is editing into this reality. It makes me think that maybe if actual reality were like that, maybe things would be better.
Martin
8/24/21, 9:00 PM
Man this chapter is amazing! Really! And it's so romantic, it SCREAMS Cupid!
8/24/21, 8:49 PM
I’m enjoying this. Will is turning into an unforgivable asshole. I like it when the bad guy wins, but only when I didn’t start sympathizing with them. I could sort of sympathize with Will in the beginning. I’d kind of like him to figure out a spell to make Lee forget how things were before. Even hotter would be if Will did that, and enjoyed the new world order, and then if Lee figured it out and turned the tables :)
8/24/21, 7:08 PM
I am beyond glad to see this return! This is easily the most hot story I've read, and I have been aching to see more chapters of this. This is an incredible chapter in the story! I love the slow, slow changes that happen. I'm starting to imaging the "dick" will start to start having pre come out his mouth at random times throughout his day, of have his muscles pump hard when his bro gets hard and horny. you are such an incredible writer and i'm so gald to see this back
8/24/21, 6:14 PM
This is by far my favorite story of the year so far. I love the dialogue between Gabe and Sam. It feels really natural and fun and light-hearted. And I love the edits they’ve made, and seeing the impact on Sam. And it’s soooo damn hot. Thanks for writing Blue and Nutiper. The two of you make an incredible team, and having seen you write these chapters, I know how much work and thought goes into them. I really appreciate it.
8/24/21, 6:03 PM
Well, I'm intrigued where this is going to go. I love a good tf story. Excellent start.
Geo
8/24/21, 3:21 AM
It's so awesome to get to read more from you. I LOVED this chapter. Honestly, you made the brothers so thoroughly deserving of punishment that seeing it come little by little makes it all the more fun to see them get messed around with and turned into frustrated and sexually-confused playthings. I love how you wrote Eli and Erik's shame over the new feelings, I definitely see that as the highlight that makes revisiting the chapters fun! I just hope Vince will let them get some public exposure or embarrassment. I love the idea of their macho egos being cracked apart bit-by-bit if their friends or co-workers (or better yet rivals) see them in their new lingere and notice the brothers being aroused by being noticed in that state. It'd be fun to see the tables turn for their macho reputations.

Blackjinx123
8/24/21, 4:40 PM
@Geo, thank you so much for your kind words and compliments, I'm flattered! I had so much fun writing this chapter (especially Eli's section), I'm so happy you enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it! As for what your hoping to see, I have some idea's in the works that run in that vein, but I'm not about to spoil it ;) thanks so much for sticking with the story and all the wonderfully motivating comments!