Recent Comments

8/24/21, 6:14 PM
This is by far my favorite story of the year so far. I love the dialogue between Gabe and Sam. It feels really natural and fun and light-hearted. And I love the edits they’ve made, and seeing the impact on Sam. And it’s soooo damn hot. Thanks for writing Blue and Nutiper. The two of you make an incredible team, and having seen you write these chapters, I know how much work and thought goes into them. I really appreciate it.
8/24/21, 6:03 PM
Well, I'm intrigued where this is going to go. I love a good tf story. Excellent start.
Geo
8/24/21, 3:21 AM
It's so awesome to get to read more from you. I LOVED this chapter. Honestly, you made the brothers so thoroughly deserving of punishment that seeing it come little by little makes it all the more fun to see them get messed around with and turned into frustrated and sexually-confused playthings. I love how you wrote Eli and Erik's shame over the new feelings, I definitely see that as the highlight that makes revisiting the chapters fun! I just hope Vince will let them get some public exposure or embarrassment. I love the idea of their macho egos being cracked apart bit-by-bit if their friends or co-workers (or better yet rivals) see them in their new lingere and notice the brothers being aroused by being noticed in that state. It'd be fun to see the tables turn for their macho reputations.

Blackjinx123
8/24/21, 4:40 PM
@Geo, thank you so much for your kind words and compliments, I'm flattered! I had so much fun writing this chapter (especially Eli's section), I'm so happy you enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it! As for what your hoping to see, I have some idea's in the works that run in that vein, but I'm not about to spoil it ;) thanks so much for sticking with the story and all the wonderfully motivating comments!
leathertrance
8/24/21, 1:21 AM
I can relate to every last bit of this story, every element from "excuses" to wear leather in public to disappointment when the gear comes off to being a sub who's bombarded by subs wanting to change me into a Dom (and attempts at it, like his). I enjoyed the story, and everyone else who commented seemed to, so it pains me to criticize ... but there's no mind control element here at *all*. A sub trying out being a Dom because a situation came up is regular, plain old life - believe me, I know. Maybe this belongs on the new site?

8/24/21, 1:41 AM
Thanks for your comment. It did feel like mind control for me as I'd always been sub and suddenly had to shift my thinking in that moment and discovered that I could take control of someone's mind. It planted a seed for me and led to me dig deep into my psyche and find that I am disposed to control. Also I may not have elaborated on this but I felt a new nature in me as I took control. The cop felt it. For us both it was all about mind control. I just haven't written it well enough.

Ppp
8/24/21, 4:20 PM
the mentality you described is really hot. it delights me to see I have the power over my sub to makr it a dom under my command. @DomDad
Kods
8/24/21, 2:23 PM
Can't wait to see the next chapter!
8/24/21, 2:16 PM
Hell yeah! This is a promising start. I’d love to read more. It’ll be fun to meet his roommates and see what Nathan does with them.
8/10/21, 6:51 PM
Interting take on power rangers. I do hope there is more to come

8/24/21, 7:36 AM
Cheers @Jonanator, and yes there are more chapters in the works.

8/24/21, 2:01 PM
@TickledPink Great
8/24/21, 12:27 PM
Please continue.
8/24/21, 11:49 AM
Interesting start. Can't wait to see where this goes.