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8/10/21, 6:51 PM
Interting take on power rangers. I do hope there is more to come

8/24/21, 7:36 AM
Cheers @Jonanator, and yes there are more chapters in the works.

8/24/21, 2:01 PM
@TickledPink Great
8/24/21, 12:27 PM
Please continue.
8/24/21, 11:49 AM
Interesting start. Can't wait to see where this goes.
8/24/21, 11:39 AM
just found this series. great stuff. love it and can't wait for more.
8/24/21, 8:58 AM
Hot story! The mental-only "cock shrinking" is a fun take on the topic.
8/24/21, 8:52 AM
Wow, it's great to see a new chapter of this! Harry's condescension is so hot. He's being mean, though! Tommy's desperation is also hot. Despite the title, I was starting to doubt whether this story was leading up to a TF-into-cock scenario, but the end of this seems to heavily hint that this is going to be the case :) I'm interested in seeing how that will go (or if I'm wrong and something else is going to happen)...
8/24/21, 8:28 AM
I love where this went. made me go back and look at the previous chapter. I can't wait to read more. the "second hand" wishing part is awesome. I really enjoyed the oblivious changes.
8/12/21, 4:36 PM
Nice. Wulfram apparently didn't count on their instincts still being heroic? Probably because the clothing ray kept the intended purpose of each person's clothes in mind rather than creating a generic uniform... If Wulfram keeps making the same mistakes - probably the same ones that got him imprisoned - he's probably going to lose badly. My predicted worse case: Two members of the Guard have non-heroic motives, the ray causes them to retire, and Herod has to rush to replace them just before the final battle of the season ;) Good world-building, very solid lampshading for the themes being parodied.

8/24/21, 7:57 AM
Thanks @Shieldage, and interesting prediction. As for Wulfram, well, you'll see soon enough. He may be playing a longer game than meets the eye. Or he might just be villainously capable, but ultimately not that bright and overly fixated on skimpifying men's clothes. Or both. Anyway, thank you for the comment!
8/11/21, 7:37 PM
Absolutely love the parody

8/24/21, 7:49 AM
Thanks, @Pisces142! I'm glad to hear other people like it as well!
8/11/21, 9:18 AM
I'm finding this entire experience just endlessly entertaining, so please do keep it up, there's obviously a lot of potential to work with and its clear you're having fun :)

8/24/21, 7:48 AM
@Mr. Sandman, thank you! I'm looking forward to getting the rest of it written out.