Recent Comments

8/24/21, 8:58 AM
Hot story! The mental-only "cock shrinking" is a fun take on the topic.
8/24/21, 8:52 AM
Wow, it's great to see a new chapter of this! Harry's condescension is so hot. He's being mean, though! Tommy's desperation is also hot. Despite the title, I was starting to doubt whether this story was leading up to a TF-into-cock scenario, but the end of this seems to heavily hint that this is going to be the case :) I'm interested in seeing how that will go (or if I'm wrong and something else is going to happen)...
8/24/21, 8:28 AM
I love where this went. made me go back and look at the previous chapter. I can't wait to read more. the "second hand" wishing part is awesome. I really enjoyed the oblivious changes.
8/12/21, 4:36 PM
Nice. Wulfram apparently didn't count on their instincts still being heroic? Probably because the clothing ray kept the intended purpose of each person's clothes in mind rather than creating a generic uniform... If Wulfram keeps making the same mistakes - probably the same ones that got him imprisoned - he's probably going to lose badly. My predicted worse case: Two members of the Guard have non-heroic motives, the ray causes them to retire, and Herod has to rush to replace them just before the final battle of the season ;) Good world-building, very solid lampshading for the themes being parodied.

8/24/21, 7:57 AM
Thanks @Shieldage, and interesting prediction. As for Wulfram, well, you'll see soon enough. He may be playing a longer game than meets the eye. Or he might just be villainously capable, but ultimately not that bright and overly fixated on skimpifying men's clothes. Or both. Anyway, thank you for the comment!
8/11/21, 7:37 PM
Absolutely love the parody

8/24/21, 7:49 AM
Thanks, @Pisces142! I'm glad to hear other people like it as well!
8/11/21, 9:18 AM
I'm finding this entire experience just endlessly entertaining, so please do keep it up, there's obviously a lot of potential to work with and its clear you're having fun :)

8/24/21, 7:48 AM
@Mr. Sandman, thank you! I'm looking forward to getting the rest of it written out.
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8/11/21, 7:28 AM
Really like the story, and looking forward to a part two, but all of the “trademarking” through the first half pulled me out of the experience. We know it’s a parody, and what it’s a parody of, so they felt somewhat redundant

8/24/21, 7:47 AM
Thank you for the note, it's good to hear where it falls short with readers. I'm glad you still liked it so far though!
8/11/21, 3:05 AM
I'm intrigued for where you will take the story, there's so many things I like here! I especially like the twisting of characters to be turned in erotic parodies of their original selves, that's something I find so appealing, especially when it goes for a wild direction. I see a lot of interesting hot and fun potential on this story, I'll be waiting for the following chapters!

8/24/21, 7:44 AM
Thanks @Plymouth58, and I hope you like where I take it as the story goes on. I'm glad you enjoyed the erotic parody aspect, as making men over into slutty self parodies is one of my favourite story devices (shock, I know).
8/10/21, 8:21 PM
Please please do more. I really want to see how this goes and how each one reacts. It would be fun to see how they act before and after having the update. Could be interesting if by the end there saving the world form the heterosexual mind set.

8/24/21, 7:39 AM
Not to worry @Cerian81 there is definitely more planned, and a lot more updates in store for them. I'd never leave the heroes stuck in such conservative outfits.
8/10/21, 4:40 PM
this is amazing ! can't wait for the next

8/24/21, 7:35 AM
Thanks for the comment, @Somnius! More on the Spectacular Guard to come soon.