Recent Comments

Anonymous
8/11/21, 7:28 AM
Really like the story, and looking forward to a part two, but all of the “trademarking” through the first half pulled me out of the experience. We know it’s a parody, and what it’s a parody of, so they felt somewhat redundant

8/24/21, 7:47 AM
Thank you for the note, it's good to hear where it falls short with readers. I'm glad you still liked it so far though!
8/11/21, 3:05 AM
I'm intrigued for where you will take the story, there's so many things I like here! I especially like the twisting of characters to be turned in erotic parodies of their original selves, that's something I find so appealing, especially when it goes for a wild direction. I see a lot of interesting hot and fun potential on this story, I'll be waiting for the following chapters!

8/24/21, 7:44 AM
Thanks @Plymouth58, and I hope you like where I take it as the story goes on. I'm glad you enjoyed the erotic parody aspect, as making men over into slutty self parodies is one of my favourite story devices (shock, I know).
8/10/21, 8:21 PM
Please please do more. I really want to see how this goes and how each one reacts. It would be fun to see how they act before and after having the update. Could be interesting if by the end there saving the world form the heterosexual mind set.

8/24/21, 7:39 AM
Not to worry @Cerian81 there is definitely more planned, and a lot more updates in store for them. I'd never leave the heroes stuck in such conservative outfits.
8/10/21, 4:40 PM
this is amazing ! can't wait for the next

8/24/21, 7:35 AM
Thanks for the comment, @Somnius! More on the Spectacular Guard to come soon.
8/10/21, 10:46 AM
So, this is part 1 I assume

8/24/21, 7:34 AM
Yep, @darkblade2814, part one of, at the moment, 6. Tentatively.
8/10/21, 9:47 AM
Interesting take on the Power Rangers.

8/24/21, 7:33 AM
Thanks @Cutlerfan, originally it was planned to be a oneshot for the superhero challenge, bit there was more I wanted to put them through than I could fit into one chapter.
8/24/21, 5:59 AM
beautiful. really hoping to see this continued!
8/24/21, 4:11 AM
I can't even begin to tell you how excited I was to see this continued. This is genuinely one of my favorite stories on this site, and I was worried that it was dead. The latest chapter was just as hot as the rest! The slowburn transformation of both of them in opposite masculine directions is intoxicating. The subtle differences that can alllllmost be explained away make the story so exciting to read. For example, the idea that they used to be the same size and strength, and now Harry is using MUCH bigger dumbbells...loved that! And you don't dwell on those changes, each change is a little tease. I love it. I'm excited to see just how far apart (and yet together!) they grow. Will Harry and Tommy start to notice the more obvious changes in their size? How BIG and TALL will Harry get? How short and skinny will Tommy shrink? So many exciting revelations to come.
8/24/21, 3:32 AM
Kept me hard and leaking the whole time! Wanted the cop to experience more sex in the bathroom (next chapter?). Wood love to be mind controlled like that to do anything I was told to do. Keep up the great work. I can visualize all that takes place in the story. That's what makes it so hot! More please!
Btm
8/23/21, 10:58 PM
Eagerly waiting for the next chapter!

8/24/21, 3:21 AM
It's super close! Just gotta do some minor editing... @Btm