Recent Comments

8/24/21, 3:32 AM
Kept me hard and leaking the whole time! Wanted the cop to experience more sex in the bathroom (next chapter?). Wood love to be mind controlled like that to do anything I was told to do. Keep up the great work. I can visualize all that takes place in the story. That's what makes it so hot! More please!
Btm
8/23/21, 10:58 PM
Eagerly waiting for the next chapter!

8/24/21, 3:21 AM
It's super close! Just gotta do some minor editing... @Btm
8/24/21, 3:18 AM
Very hot story and well done. Would have liked to see the relationship between Adam and Tony progress just a little more. In the end it was a somewhat terse master/slave relationship that was lacking in eroticism (when I think of coaches, I think tough but affectionate, this master was almost disinterested).
8/24/21, 3:12 AM
i am genuinely surprised to see this series return, its not an unwelcome surprise though, keep up the fantastic work man!
Anonymous
8/24/21, 2:44 AM
I’m enjoying where the story is going, but the inconsistent pronouns are definitely hurting the reading experience. There were a couple of them in chapter one but they’re really prevalent in this second one. If you can take the time to fix them it’ll catapult the story from good to great!
Anonymous
8/24/21, 2:18 AM
Great, as usual!!!!
Anonymous
8/24/21, 2:04 AM
Sure, continue series ,more antics with twists & turns that are not expected ! Don't forget to use the coaches & teachers & other workers, janitor !

8/24/21, 2:12 AM
Maybe even jock up Jacob, emasculate Alfredo or other jocks. There are a lot of hair antics to go with too ! Piercing and tattooing can't be left out as well. And there is also the fraternity houses. I think that should give you enough ideas to get started with something ! Good luck !
8/23/21, 5:55 PM
This is such a hot story. You should totally do a sequel to this, please, it was hottttt

8/23/21, 9:20 PM
@Jonanator i currently don't have plans for a sequel, but i am able to be persuaded! thanks for commenting!

8/23/21, 9:53 PM
@Mind Labyrinth Yeah. honestly, the worked you did, it does stand a good chance for a continuation. I think I might read it again. Truly one of my favorite stories. Great work.

8/23/21, 11:22 PM
@Jonanator i would have to give serious consideration as to how i would continue the story, but as i say, i am open to options!

8/23/21, 11:26 PM
@Mind Labyrinth no problem, besides, comments and options are what give us inspiration. I have two stories I'm currently working on the new site, and it's quite hards to come up with stuff as I go. So, I understand. Still, great work, your one of my favorite authors on her by the way.

8/23/21, 11:32 PM
@Jonanator its not always easy finding the avenue for continuing a story that a reader sees, so feedback is more vital than oxygen. I'm thrilled to hear you like my work so much, if you come up with ideas, you can always find me skulking around the discord server.

8/23/21, 11:40 PM
@Mind Labyrinth Certainly, I'll totally will. Also, check out the stories I'm working on over at GayCupidStories let me know if there good so far. I'm trying, it's my first time, but I hope to get better as I progress. Enjoy your day

8/24/21, 1:31 AM
@Jonanator i will have to check out your stories soon! right now i am at work, but i definitely know how important feedback is for improvement.

8/24/21, 2:02 AM
@Mind Labyrinth thanks, great chatting. It's fun to make a new friend on here
8/24/21, 1:59 AM
It's very distracting that the pronouns of the characters keep switching around. I couldn't tell whether this story was written with female characters and then incompletely re-written to be m/m or if there is some sort of deliberate gender confusion going on. If it was written this way for effect and not just typos, well, not a good effect.
8/24/21, 12:37 AM
woof this hit all my buttons. I love Vincent and how he is presented and the breakdown was perfect.

8/24/21, 1:29 AM
@Cadek thanks for letting me know you enjoyed my story. Vincent was a really fun character to build and explore.