Recent Comments

8/23/21, 7:28 PM
Wow. That was incredible. Well worth the wait that you described in the author's note. I like that Vincent didn't feel like a villain. Definitely not a hero, but someone that is doing their best with the power they received, and if they happen to use it to their advantage, so be it. Or perhaps he'd started to become corrupted by the power he had. Either way, it was hot. The attention to details was nice, specifically about the clothes worn. I do like a well-dressed man, and those descriptors in your story did not go unnoticed. The one small thing that took me out of the story a little bit was in a couple of the instances of stuttering happening, the letter that was stuttered was its own sentence. It's not a huge deal, but it did confuse me the couple times I ran into it. This one is going into my list of stories I come back to for sure. Great work!

8/23/21, 11:21 PM
@Proteus Thank you for your lovely comments! That you noticed some of my favorite flourishes makes my day! Vincent is my best attempt at a regular guy who is trying hard not to lose his mind with the power he has been given, so its awesome to hear that this resonated with the readers. i will take your critique very seriously and work harder to ensure such errors dont crop up in future stories, thanks for bringing it to my attention. i hope you enjoy this story many times.

8/24/21, 12:14 AM
@Mind Labyrinth The two stutters were not a huge deal, and I thought that maybe it had something to do with rendering or copying and pasting. It's definitely not something to stress yourself over too much. I look forward to reading the other stories in your backlog! I've definitely enjoyed this one and others you've written!
8/23/21, 11:43 PM
Hot story. Hope more is to come.
8/23/21, 11:25 PM
Standing ovation for that one!
8/23/21, 11:05 PM
lets see how the other children will change
8/23/21, 10:43 PM
This chapter feels really well edited, considering the comment that this one was cut short/rearranged. The subtle tone shift was well executed as a transition chapter from full hot scenes to more plot development. I fell myself getting pulled into the larger story. Great job!
8/23/21, 9:31 PM
Thought it was great! More pink speedos!
8/23/21, 9:19 PM
I loved this! Excellent story
8/23/21, 9:17 PM
I think Will secretly knew it would make straight Lee want him. despite the tense change, I loved Lee ending up smelling how good Will's cock smelled. and the BJ
Harry
8/16/21, 8:41 PM
Hello, I liked your story but I would like to know what exactly happened with Blake and if Polter will possess him again and humiliate him and that was my favorite part, although I would have liked him to humiliate him in more ways

Oddballs
8/16/21, 9:44 PM
@Harry Oh Blake more or less returned to his life after running practically nude in the morning, had his car located, safely towed, deep washed, and exorcised while also going a whole month sleeping with a hand-made pillow fort strapped to his ass and a mask with a cross on it because he was terrified the ghost was going to enter him again... Come to think of it, that could be a decent starting point. For now though, my fixation is on my current stories and I haven't had a hankering for ghostly antics for a while, so I'm not quite sure just when I'll write a new ghost post. Thank you for reading my story though and taking the time to write a nice comment. It means a lot :3

Harry
8/18/21, 5:16 PM
@Oddballs You're welcome and thanks for answering my comment, although he asked me why Blake wouldn't have grabbed clothes that were there on the floor so as not to be naked and also poor Blake who had to put up with all that but it was very funny and funny what Polter told him made me do I wish the same thing that happened to Blake would happen to me and for Polter to possess me would be a lot of fun

Oddballs
8/18/21, 6:25 PM
@Harry Blake was panicking big time. He didn't think to stop and get clothes until after he sprinted 5 blocks out of the gay avenue because he thought the ghost would catch up with him at any moment for more raunchy gay fuckery

Harry
8/18/21, 8:00 PM
@Oddballs I understand even though he asked me what kind of clothes might have been on the floor and if Blake hadn't panicked that he should have put on and by the way I hope I don't bother you by writing here

Harry
8/23/21, 6:52 AM
@Oddballs Hi how are you

Oddballs
8/23/21, 7:42 AM
@Harry you may want to check out or contact me on my Twitter if you like. Here's my link: https://twitter.com/NewsScene1

Harry
8/23/21, 10:10 AM
@Oddballs Ok, I will do it

Harry
8/23/21, 6:02 PM
@Oddballs By the way, I already spoke to you on Twitter
8/23/21, 5:29 PM
Very hot! I look forward to the next chapter.