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Anonymous
8/24/21, 2:04 AM
Sure, continue series ,more antics with twists & turns that are not expected ! Don't forget to use the coaches & teachers & other workers, janitor !

8/24/21, 2:12 AM
Maybe even jock up Jacob, emasculate Alfredo or other jocks. There are a lot of hair antics to go with too ! Piercing and tattooing can't be left out as well. And there is also the fraternity houses. I think that should give you enough ideas to get started with something ! Good luck !
8/23/21, 5:55 PM
This is such a hot story. You should totally do a sequel to this, please, it was hottttt

8/23/21, 9:20 PM
@Jonanator i currently don't have plans for a sequel, but i am able to be persuaded! thanks for commenting!

8/23/21, 9:53 PM
@Mind Labyrinth Yeah. honestly, the worked you did, it does stand a good chance for a continuation. I think I might read it again. Truly one of my favorite stories. Great work.

8/23/21, 11:22 PM
@Jonanator i would have to give serious consideration as to how i would continue the story, but as i say, i am open to options!

8/23/21, 11:26 PM
@Mind Labyrinth no problem, besides, comments and options are what give us inspiration. I have two stories I'm currently working on the new site, and it's quite hards to come up with stuff as I go. So, I understand. Still, great work, your one of my favorite authors on her by the way.

8/23/21, 11:32 PM
@Jonanator its not always easy finding the avenue for continuing a story that a reader sees, so feedback is more vital than oxygen. I'm thrilled to hear you like my work so much, if you come up with ideas, you can always find me skulking around the discord server.

8/23/21, 11:40 PM
@Mind Labyrinth Certainly, I'll totally will. Also, check out the stories I'm working on over at GayCupidStories let me know if there good so far. I'm trying, it's my first time, but I hope to get better as I progress. Enjoy your day

8/24/21, 1:31 AM
@Jonanator i will have to check out your stories soon! right now i am at work, but i definitely know how important feedback is for improvement.

8/24/21, 2:02 AM
@Mind Labyrinth thanks, great chatting. It's fun to make a new friend on here
8/24/21, 1:59 AM
It's very distracting that the pronouns of the characters keep switching around. I couldn't tell whether this story was written with female characters and then incompletely re-written to be m/m or if there is some sort of deliberate gender confusion going on. If it was written this way for effect and not just typos, well, not a good effect.
8/24/21, 12:37 AM
woof this hit all my buttons. I love Vincent and how he is presented and the breakdown was perfect.

8/24/21, 1:29 AM
@Cadek thanks for letting me know you enjoyed my story. Vincent was a really fun character to build and explore.
Oct 10, 2021
Martin
8/23/21, 8:52 PM
Would you like to publish that on GayCollarStories once it's been opened? Can't be that long...

8/24/21, 1:09 AM
@Martin Absolutely. Whatever you think is most appropriate.
8/23/21, 7:28 PM
Wow. That was incredible. Well worth the wait that you described in the author's note. I like that Vincent didn't feel like a villain. Definitely not a hero, but someone that is doing their best with the power they received, and if they happen to use it to their advantage, so be it. Or perhaps he'd started to become corrupted by the power he had. Either way, it was hot. The attention to details was nice, specifically about the clothes worn. I do like a well-dressed man, and those descriptors in your story did not go unnoticed. The one small thing that took me out of the story a little bit was in a couple of the instances of stuttering happening, the letter that was stuttered was its own sentence. It's not a huge deal, but it did confuse me the couple times I ran into it. This one is going into my list of stories I come back to for sure. Great work!

8/23/21, 11:21 PM
@Proteus Thank you for your lovely comments! That you noticed some of my favorite flourishes makes my day! Vincent is my best attempt at a regular guy who is trying hard not to lose his mind with the power he has been given, so its awesome to hear that this resonated with the readers. i will take your critique very seriously and work harder to ensure such errors dont crop up in future stories, thanks for bringing it to my attention. i hope you enjoy this story many times.

8/24/21, 12:14 AM
@Mind Labyrinth The two stutters were not a huge deal, and I thought that maybe it had something to do with rendering or copying and pasting. It's definitely not something to stress yourself over too much. I look forward to reading the other stories in your backlog! I've definitely enjoyed this one and others you've written!
8/23/21, 11:43 PM
Hot story. Hope more is to come.
8/23/21, 11:25 PM
Standing ovation for that one!
8/23/21, 11:05 PM
lets see how the other children will change
8/23/21, 10:43 PM
This chapter feels really well edited, considering the comment that this one was cut short/rearranged. The subtle tone shift was well executed as a transition chapter from full hot scenes to more plot development. I fell myself getting pulled into the larger story. Great job!