Recent Comments

8/21/21, 12:37 PM
I agree that there are some pacing issues, and a proof read would be welcome. But this is a very hot story, I had to read it one-handed.

8/23/21, 12:57 AM
Thank you for the reply, but where would I find proofreaders? @amul
Anonymous
8/22/21, 12:13 AM
**Really** hot concept, I love contagious gay transformation, but as mentioned above, this could have been twice the length. Looking forward to more!

8/23/21, 12:56 AM
Thank you for the reply. I was trying to go for a more shorter story.
8/21/21, 8:54 AM
Love the transformations, but I wish the story itself was slightly slower paced. For instance, the stuff with the two investigating cops had the potential to be extremely hot, but it was over and done with in two sentences.

8/23/21, 12:52 AM
@Hypnothrill Thank you for your opinion. I'll try to do better next time, when it comes to adding story hooks. Why did you think I have the cops into the story?
8/22/21, 4:15 AM
I loved it. looking foward to where this will be going. very hot so far.

8/23/21, 12:48 AM
Thanks, @RedPandaCat
8/23/21, 12:32 AM
Off to a great start. Interesting premise, I enjoyed the characters. The spell wasn't particularly hot, and I'm glad it wasn't permanent. Perhaps it will serve as a good learning experience for Will and Lee.
8/22/21, 11:26 PM
I'm enjoying this continuation! Love the premise. One note, it makes it a little harder to read when you're swapping between 1st and 3rd person. Sometimes it's "he" for Lee and other times it's "me". Sometimes it's even mid-sentence ("Lee got on my knees"). I assume it was written one way and you started changing it to the other? But other than that, the idea of the story and characters is great! Can't wait to see how you continue.

8/23/21, 12:13 AM
@Razz TFs oh for fucks sake, I thought fixed all those. I switched it from first to third for some reason but I guess I missed a few places. I'll fix them.
8/21/21, 10:03 PM
this one was intense

8/22/21, 9:28 PM
hopefully it still got you edging @darkblade2814
8/21/21, 5:27 AM
You should do a sequel to this about what he wants to do to Jamie now that he's under his control.

8/22/21, 7:50 PM
thank you@Jonanator

8/22/21, 7:52 PM
@hypnosissir welcome.
Anonymous
8/21/21, 8:16 PM
Will we be getting a sequel?

8/22/21, 7:51 PM
coming soon :)
Anonymous
8/21/21, 3:36 PM
Fantastic foundation! Hope to see a sequel chapter!

8/22/21, 7:51 PM
thank you@anonymous