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Aug 11, 2021
8/11/21, 7:03 PM
So hot. please tell me you are doing more to this one

8/23/21, 6:28 AM
Prolly not. But you never know where my brain will go. @Jonanator
8/23/21, 6:01 AM
really enjoyed this story, well written. I do hope that you will write some more, and Jeff and the cop carry on meeting. Maybe the cop's uniform changes into a leather one and he become more submissive.
8/23/21, 4:22 AM
Nice chapter. Hope more is to come.
8/23/21, 4:16 AM
I feel like this one is a candidate to repost over to the new site. In the end, Ben didn't make his choice based on muscle growth, ya know?
One Ring
8/23/21, 3:50 AM
Thank you for commenting. Glad you enjoyed.
8/23/21, 2:16 AM
I'm really curious to find out if the narrator's getting spillover from his own controls, or if his roommate has been getting him with his own not quite as intense jockifying subliminal. Also, looking forward to sex.
8/21/21, 12:37 PM
I agree that there are some pacing issues, and a proof read would be welcome. But this is a very hot story, I had to read it one-handed.

8/23/21, 12:57 AM
Thank you for the reply, but where would I find proofreaders? @amul
Anonymous
8/22/21, 12:13 AM
**Really** hot concept, I love contagious gay transformation, but as mentioned above, this could have been twice the length. Looking forward to more!

8/23/21, 12:56 AM
Thank you for the reply. I was trying to go for a more shorter story.
8/21/21, 8:54 AM
Love the transformations, but I wish the story itself was slightly slower paced. For instance, the stuff with the two investigating cops had the potential to be extremely hot, but it was over and done with in two sentences.

8/23/21, 12:52 AM
@Hypnothrill Thank you for your opinion. I'll try to do better next time, when it comes to adding story hooks. Why did you think I have the cops into the story?
8/22/21, 4:15 AM
I loved it. looking foward to where this will be going. very hot so far.

8/23/21, 12:48 AM
Thanks, @RedPandaCat