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8/21/21, 4:10 AM
This is a great start!

8/22/21, 7:50 PM
thank you@zorkenzz
8/22/21, 6:11 PM
Impressive realism. Authentic characters. The sex scene was well-done. Everything about this story was well-done, including the disappointment of "surprise" vanilla sex which is something I guess every kinkster has experienced.
8/22/21, 5:58 PM
Great job...glad I found you :)
EdBear
8/22/21, 5:50 PM
Excellent Story sex and cigars hot hot hot
8/22/21, 5:24 PM
I think this have to be my favorite leather themed story yet. You made me think on how does it feels to wear a full leather uniform and on the thrill of play in leather, although is funny, because you were not super descriptive! Maybe it was for the details, like the code with the keys left and right (by the way, I didn't knew that; I was only aware of the bandana color code, but didn't knew keys would be used to give signs too). Or maybe you just knew where, when or what to point at to the reader? I'm not sure, I'll have to read it a couple of times before to be sure, but the thing is, I like it a lot, it is very sexy and hot, and the dialogues and the dirty talk are great. I agree with Papa Werebear, I'd love to see more of their relationship! I had the impression that John was changing too! I'll be anxiously waiting for another chapter.
8/22/21, 4:18 PM
That was beautiful. I would love to see the relationship between the two of them bloom. A new leather dom and his loving subordinate. Perhaps Jeff gets that motorcycle after all? Thank you for writing this it was wonderful!
8/22/21, 3:24 PM
Needs a few more chapters to chart Jeff's journey to being a Top, and including the decent of the cop to a total sub slave
8/22/21, 2:53 PM
Great start and so ready and excited to read the next chapter.
Aug 21, 2021
8/22/21, 2:03 PM
Great Fantasy, would love to see more of how David takes advantage of Marc as a baby. I'd love a dad to take control of me like this. Hope you continue writing!
8/22/21, 1:25 PM
I'm going to be haunted for weeks by the dilemma of what to do about the tip if you sleep with your server at a restaurant.