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8/21/21, 5:27 AM
You should do a sequel to this about what he wants to do to Jamie now that he's under his control.

8/22/21, 7:50 PM
thank you@Jonanator

8/22/21, 7:52 PM
@hypnosissir welcome.
Anonymous
8/21/21, 8:16 PM
Will we be getting a sequel?

8/22/21, 7:51 PM
coming soon :)
Anonymous
8/21/21, 3:36 PM
Fantastic foundation! Hope to see a sequel chapter!

8/22/21, 7:51 PM
thank you@anonymous
8/21/21, 2:57 PM
Great story. I hope you write either a new chapter or a sequel so we can see what just Jamie is like under the good doctor hypno control.

8/22/21, 7:51 PM
thank you@Redcoma100
8/21/21, 1:33 PM
Yes, i would encourage you as well to continue the story. You have a solid foundation here to expand your story.

8/22/21, 7:50 PM
thank you@SmurfMan
8/21/21, 4:10 AM
This is a great start!

8/22/21, 7:50 PM
thank you@zorkenzz
8/22/21, 6:11 PM
Impressive realism. Authentic characters. The sex scene was well-done. Everything about this story was well-done, including the disappointment of "surprise" vanilla sex which is something I guess every kinkster has experienced.
8/22/21, 5:58 PM
Great job...glad I found you :)
EdBear
8/22/21, 5:50 PM
Excellent Story sex and cigars hot hot hot
8/22/21, 5:24 PM
I think this have to be my favorite leather themed story yet. You made me think on how does it feels to wear a full leather uniform and on the thrill of play in leather, although is funny, because you were not super descriptive! Maybe it was for the details, like the code with the keys left and right (by the way, I didn't knew that; I was only aware of the bandana color code, but didn't knew keys would be used to give signs too). Or maybe you just knew where, when or what to point at to the reader? I'm not sure, I'll have to read it a couple of times before to be sure, but the thing is, I like it a lot, it is very sexy and hot, and the dialogues and the dirty talk are great. I agree with Papa Werebear, I'd love to see more of their relationship! I had the impression that John was changing too! I'll be anxiously waiting for another chapter.