Recent Comments

8/22/21, 11:26 PM
I'm enjoying this continuation! Love the premise. One note, it makes it a little harder to read when you're swapping between 1st and 3rd person. Sometimes it's "he" for Lee and other times it's "me". Sometimes it's even mid-sentence ("Lee got on my knees"). I assume it was written one way and you started changing it to the other? But other than that, the idea of the story and characters is great! Can't wait to see how you continue.

8/23/21, 12:13 AM
@Razz TFs oh for fucks sake, I thought fixed all those. I switched it from first to third for some reason but I guess I missed a few places. I'll fix them.
8/21/21, 10:03 PM
this one was intense

8/22/21, 9:28 PM
hopefully it still got you edging @darkblade2814
8/21/21, 5:27 AM
You should do a sequel to this about what he wants to do to Jamie now that he's under his control.

8/22/21, 7:50 PM
thank you@Jonanator

8/22/21, 7:52 PM
@hypnosissir welcome.
Anonymous
8/21/21, 8:16 PM
Will we be getting a sequel?

8/22/21, 7:51 PM
coming soon :)
Anonymous
8/21/21, 3:36 PM
Fantastic foundation! Hope to see a sequel chapter!

8/22/21, 7:51 PM
thank you@anonymous
8/21/21, 2:57 PM
Great story. I hope you write either a new chapter or a sequel so we can see what just Jamie is like under the good doctor hypno control.

8/22/21, 7:51 PM
thank you@Redcoma100
8/21/21, 1:33 PM
Yes, i would encourage you as well to continue the story. You have a solid foundation here to expand your story.

8/22/21, 7:50 PM
thank you@SmurfMan
8/21/21, 4:10 AM
This is a great start!

8/22/21, 7:50 PM
thank you@zorkenzz
8/22/21, 6:11 PM
Impressive realism. Authentic characters. The sex scene was well-done. Everything about this story was well-done, including the disappointment of "surprise" vanilla sex which is something I guess every kinkster has experienced.
8/22/21, 5:58 PM
Great job...glad I found you :)