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8/21/21, 10:03 PM
this one was intense

8/22/21, 9:28 PM
hopefully it still got you edging @darkblade2814
8/21/21, 5:27 AM
You should do a sequel to this about what he wants to do to Jamie now that he's under his control.

8/22/21, 7:50 PM
thank you@Jonanator

8/22/21, 7:52 PM
@hypnosissir welcome.
Anonymous
8/21/21, 8:16 PM
Will we be getting a sequel?

8/22/21, 7:51 PM
coming soon :)
Anonymous
8/21/21, 3:36 PM
Fantastic foundation! Hope to see a sequel chapter!

8/22/21, 7:51 PM
thank you@anonymous
8/21/21, 2:57 PM
Great story. I hope you write either a new chapter or a sequel so we can see what just Jamie is like under the good doctor hypno control.

8/22/21, 7:51 PM
thank you@Redcoma100
8/21/21, 1:33 PM
Yes, i would encourage you as well to continue the story. You have a solid foundation here to expand your story.

8/22/21, 7:50 PM
thank you@SmurfMan
8/21/21, 4:10 AM
This is a great start!

8/22/21, 7:50 PM
thank you@zorkenzz
8/22/21, 6:11 PM
Impressive realism. Authentic characters. The sex scene was well-done. Everything about this story was well-done, including the disappointment of "surprise" vanilla sex which is something I guess every kinkster has experienced.
8/22/21, 5:58 PM
Great job...glad I found you :)
EdBear
8/22/21, 5:50 PM
Excellent Story sex and cigars hot hot hot