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Apr 22, 2010
boi98229
8/22/21, 7:56 AM
Very nicely done! i've been waiting for personal VR equipment and software to catch up with my own fantasies of D/s and mind control, and my love of hypnosis. i went on a virtual reality ride once in Las Vegas quite a few years ago. The setup consisted of surround sound, and a curved movie screen that wrapped about 270 degrees around a movable platform that tipped in various directions to augment the visual of our riding in an aerial vehicle that was flying rapidly around inside a cave down various passages and shafts. It was so real, i had to look behind me to the exit sign of the room to get re-oriented to reality. Your story reminded me quite vividly of the sense of reality and feeling of being somewhere else doing something else all completely simulated by the environment. I would love to try on one of the General's VR suits and see just how real it could be. Thanks for a fun very erotic experience!
8/22/21, 6:41 AM
Ehhh there's no silver lining or real investment in the story.
8/22/21, 6:39 AM
Will there be more?
8/22/21, 6:34 AM
Thanks a lot for your kind comments. @Jonanator Yes the story goes on. Just a matter of if I get the wherewithal to write another part. Thanks for reading.
8/22/21, 4:08 AM
My nips and cock were hard the whole time while I read. I want and crave more of your excellent story. So erotic and hypnotizing while reading it. Where can I apply for the same job at Pete's !
8/22/21, 3:54 AM
will we see a continuation of this? so well written and with lots of promise for more.
8/22/21, 3:29 AM
I want to echo what Plymouth said. As a one-off, the stripper episode was funny and all, but since the series is on-going it had to be addressed and Charlie handled it as a decent person should. He may be a pervert but I'd hate to think he was a psychopath.
8/22/21, 3:16 AM
Charlie making the professor a narcissist and using that to seduce him instead of just writing "is gay and into chubby guys" was a strong writing choice by the author. It plays out very well.
Aug 21, 2021
8/22/21, 1:55 AM
No choices No decisions No responsibilities EVER excellent story, capturing so many elements of my own fantasies - especially regression so far
8/22/21, 12:18 AM
It has to be a hot story to get me hard. That got me hard. Moo.