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8/21/21, 8:33 PM
This is one of my favorite new stories in a while! I just love EVERYTHING about this! The idea of making your roommate the most manly virile alpha male possible while unconsciously making yourself as such as well... UGH! Love it so much! I hope you write a second part to satisfy my (and probably others') hunger for more masculine GROWTH and demeanor, but if not, that's alright too! Amazing concept and story!
8/21/21, 8:04 PM
Omg that's hot! Short and straight to the point! Loved the transformation and slow personality takeover!
8/21/21, 7:59 PM
Lovely start! It's fun to see willing gainer-related stories here!
8/21/21, 7:53 PM
Lovely transformation and story!
8/21/21, 7:47 PM
I loved the story, but the ending isn't really satisfying to me. I feel that grant should have gotten revenge considering he was forced to do all that, kinda made the whole ending part of the game a useless story piece. Overall though, it was an amazing read
Jul 29, 2021
8/2/21, 1:09 PM
Transforming a junkie into a jock (and probably saving his life) is a nice change from transforming functional people into morons. Nice idea and keep writing!

8/21/21, 7:45 PM
@amul I agree! And it's a nice change of pace to have the protagonist unchanged or mind controlled through the story.
8/21/21, 7:34 PM
Gotta admit I was a bit reticent reading this at first since farts aren't my kind of thing, but the tags made me curious enough to look into it and now I want to read the continuation! Like others mentioned, try using a editor for the syntax before posting (usually there is one integrated to most text writing programs). Good job!
Mindwhisperer
8/21/21, 6:09 PM
I'm sorry, I require a story to have at least a minimal amount of believability. *"Local cycling rules - you gotta do what I say.” “Uh, OK, man…” Jake laughed uneasily, now regretting engaging with the other guy at all. This was getting kind of awkward. “Yeah, now I’m all boned up from that sprint. You’re gonna suck me off, dude.”* Really?
8/21/21, 5:32 PM
You should do more to this, it's hot.
8/21/21, 5:02 PM
You should do another part, I love this story.