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8/20/21, 2:34 PM
Incredible! A classic and extremely hot induction. It's perfect! :D
8/20/21, 11:29 AM
I'm beginning to hate Daniel's father. He's too controlling and authoritarian. His views on staff are odd to put it kindly. I think Daniel will eventually have to fight his father to gain control of his life. I'm not even sure his father is actually his father. I fear some deep deception will be revealed and Daniel will have to struggle to hold on to the world he knows and wants; with or without Papa. I've suspected something was going on when his father suddenly rejoined his life with magic. I don't trust "Papa" at all.

8/20/21, 1:51 PM
@Cutlerfan I always love to read your theories! Papa is definitely an interesting character for me. We'll just have to see what happens 😜
8/19/21, 9:32 PM
welcome back

8/20/21, 9:36 AM
Thank you, was a longer time away then intended, hope you enjoyed 😄@darkblade2814

8/20/21, 11:07 AM
@ArdanWolfe l also do somethings similar with the names, whenever the transformation does change enougeh the go by a diferent name as in their identity as a whole

8/20/21, 11:25 AM
Yeah, it's just to show their old life is gone and they now ARE the game character. Idk if the next chapter will be the last or if I'm going to go back and make a "Level 1" chapter to go into more detail of Shrio's transformation. @darkblade2814

8/20/21, 11:25 AM
Yeah, it's just to show their old life is gone and they now ARE the game character. Idk if the next chapter will be the last or if I'm going to go back and make a "Level 1" chapter to go into more detail of Shrio's transformation. @darkblade2814
DD
8/20/21, 10:26 AM
That was a great induction and I'm very curious to see the results of this on Mark. Keep up the good work.
8/20/21, 9:43 AM
I Love the bathhouse stories also.
Ben
8/20/21, 4:31 AM
Not only did this get me off, I'm super into this whole world you've created!! Very good descriptions made it seem real, I was able to visualize everything and I can't wait to see what happens!!

8/20/21, 9:37 AM
Thank you, glad you enjoyed. 😄@Ben
Anonymous
8/19/21, 10:09 PM
excellent work

8/20/21, 9:36 AM
Thank you 😊
8/20/21, 8:45 AM
This is your first story? Amazing job. A nice, classic hypnotist story. You definitely have a way with words.
8/20/21, 7:10 AM
the photos to this story no longer exist which is disappointing.....that & the fact that i don't have tumblr.....any other way to c the photos?
8/20/21, 4:14 AM
Nice story so far, hope more is to come. I do have a question though, who does Dave really want, and who does he rally love out of all these guys. Will you touch on that in the coming chapters.