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8/19/21, 9:32 PM
welcome back

8/20/21, 9:36 AM
Thank you, was a longer time away then intended, hope you enjoyed 😄@darkblade2814

8/20/21, 11:07 AM
@ArdanWolfe l also do somethings similar with the names, whenever the transformation does change enougeh the go by a diferent name as in their identity as a whole

8/20/21, 11:25 AM
Yeah, it's just to show their old life is gone and they now ARE the game character. Idk if the next chapter will be the last or if I'm going to go back and make a "Level 1" chapter to go into more detail of Shrio's transformation. @darkblade2814

8/20/21, 11:25 AM
Yeah, it's just to show their old life is gone and they now ARE the game character. Idk if the next chapter will be the last or if I'm going to go back and make a "Level 1" chapter to go into more detail of Shrio's transformation. @darkblade2814
DD
8/20/21, 10:26 AM
That was a great induction and I'm very curious to see the results of this on Mark. Keep up the good work.
8/20/21, 9:43 AM
I Love the bathhouse stories also.
Ben
8/20/21, 4:31 AM
Not only did this get me off, I'm super into this whole world you've created!! Very good descriptions made it seem real, I was able to visualize everything and I can't wait to see what happens!!

8/20/21, 9:37 AM
Thank you, glad you enjoyed. 😄@Ben
Anonymous
8/19/21, 10:09 PM
excellent work

8/20/21, 9:36 AM
Thank you 😊
8/20/21, 8:45 AM
This is your first story? Amazing job. A nice, classic hypnotist story. You definitely have a way with words.
8/20/21, 7:10 AM
the photos to this story no longer exist which is disappointing.....that & the fact that i don't have tumblr.....any other way to c the photos?
8/20/21, 4:14 AM
Nice story so far, hope more is to come. I do have a question though, who does Dave really want, and who does he rally love out of all these guys. Will you touch on that in the coming chapters.
8/19/21, 9:47 PM
It's funny: although this chapter was in fact longer than the first one, I felt it shorter ha, ha! oh, my, what a cliffhanger! I'm dying to know what happens next!

8/20/21, 12:39 AM
@Plymouth58 I love a good cliffhanger haha! I'll have the next part out soon!

8/20/21, 4:10 AM
@jockslut I can't wait!
8/17/21, 4:00 AM
I was willing to get past the awkward writing, but racial slurs are such a boner killer...

Anonymous
8/17/21, 6:29 PM
@hapaga5899 What racial slurs?

Anonymous
8/19/21, 2:54 AM
@hapaga5899 What racial slurs? I don't know what story you were reading. And WC, that's not his thing.

Anonymous
8/19/21, 10:45 PM
g/psy is a slur

Anonymous
8/20/21, 3:01 AM
@Anonymous Get the fuck out of here! Gypsy is a slur, my fucking ass!