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Aug 15, 2021
8/16/21, 12:39 AM
This story was very hot, and I agree with others, I see a lot of potential for a series, especially to solve some unanswered questions - but not too much, sometimes it's better to not know too much. Unlike the previous comment, I like the pink hair detail, I think it could add a lot if you expand some details on that idea. You see, for a time I dyed my hair to hot bubblegum pink (I loved how I looked, by the way), while changing my clothing style for something more modern, and I learned firsthand how important such a change in your appearance can be. It was a lot of fun experiencing the reactions of other people, especially men, the way they relate to you, what they expect from you, and for good and bad how judgmental they can be... and how you feel about those reactions. Interestingly, I learned how true some stereotypes are, despite all those people who say stereotypes aren't real. I'd say it's a 50-50, for my experience. As many have said in the comments, I'm curious about the other previous experiments, but here's one suggestion: what if some of those experiments went wrong in different degrees? Like, really wrong, that would be something cool to see. Also, the dyed hair detail made me imagine a cop being an unexpected experiment subject, with his hair changing to an electric neon blue... I'll leave it there, it's just a suggestion. Ha, ha!

8/16/21, 1:29 AM
@Plymouth58 I think we need you to write a story about how men treated you when you had that bubblegum pink hair! sounds like fun and sexy investigative journalism to me

8/16/21, 2:11 AM
@scablevoled Now that you mention it, it would be a fun project, buddy! I must find some way to frame it in a mind control plot to publish it here.

8/16/21, 4:10 PM
@Plymouth58 perhaps "salon owner needs new receptionist/hair model, and someone is desperate for a haircut before an interview!"

8/16/21, 4:48 PM
@scablevoled ahhhhhh, that's a good idea, it certainly would work well, buddy, thank you so much for the suggestion! I'll work on that story. I'm thinking that it would work fine making it in two parts, one describing mostly my experiences with some small fictional touches here and there, and a second going mostly fictional and wild, ha, ha.

8/16/21, 5:33 PM
@Plymouth58 Looking forward to reading! Godspeed

8/16/21, 7:51 PM
@Plymouth58 I love your idea of an experiment going wrong. The electric blue hair is a very nice touch too. The first idea that came to mind was having a cop be experimented on with the boy slut formula but something going wrong and he becomes a muscular power bottom. If you've got any other ideas don't hesitate to let me know!

8/19/21, 9:21 PM
@jockslut turning him into a power bottom sounds perfect, that would be fun! but please, keep him in his uniform if it's possible, or even better, an altered spoof of his uniform. Would be fun if his mind get caught in the middle of be fully transformed and becomes very slow minded and confused about the meaning and duties of a cop. I've seen you've uploaded a new chapter. I'm anxious to read it!
Aug 15, 2021
8/19/21, 5:28 PM
Really good story.
Anonymous
8/19/21, 7:55 AM
I love a good race change, especially arab! A daddy tf is the cherry on top! I wouldn't mind seeing the 2 Rahims meet either, or maybe this newly transformed Rahim is looking for a son? There's a few typos but other than that good work!

8/19/21, 2:12 PM
@Anonymous Rahim is described as Pakistani, so definitely not "arab." Although I didn't get the sense that the author cared deeply about this distinction.
Anonymous
8/19/21, 11:59 AM
great work! part 2 incoming any time soon?
Evan
8/19/21, 10:24 AM
Loved this. Very well done!
8/19/21, 9:11 AM
This is so hot. when is the next part coming?
8/18/21, 8:03 PM
Chapter 13* specifically. Their original meeting is in chapter 5.

8/19/21, 8:37 AM
@Norismo Oh boy, yes, that's a bit complicated. Okay, so it's another version of the meeting, with the changes from the latter chapters? Okay, it makes a lot more sense that way. Still confused by the manor bit, but that might get explained later on.
8/19/21, 8:29 AM
Always love a story with pits. 🥰
8/19/21, 6:18 AM
Short and sweet. Now I want the two Rahims to meet. I love a good stink/musk story.
Ben
8/19/21, 6:00 AM
Fuck I love this~

8/19/21, 6:02 AM
im glad! thank you @Ben