Recent Comments

8/20/21, 7:10 AM
the photos to this story no longer exist which is disappointing.....that & the fact that i don't have tumblr.....any other way to c the photos?
8/20/21, 4:14 AM
Nice story so far, hope more is to come. I do have a question though, who does Dave really want, and who does he rally love out of all these guys. Will you touch on that in the coming chapters.
8/19/21, 9:47 PM
It's funny: although this chapter was in fact longer than the first one, I felt it shorter ha, ha! oh, my, what a cliffhanger! I'm dying to know what happens next!

8/20/21, 12:39 AM
@Plymouth58 I love a good cliffhanger haha! I'll have the next part out soon!

8/20/21, 4:10 AM
@jockslut I can't wait!
8/17/21, 4:00 AM
I was willing to get past the awkward writing, but racial slurs are such a boner killer...

Anonymous
8/17/21, 6:29 PM
@hapaga5899 What racial slurs?

Anonymous
8/19/21, 2:54 AM
@hapaga5899 What racial slurs? I don't know what story you were reading. And WC, that's not his thing.

Anonymous
8/19/21, 10:45 PM
g/psy is a slur

Anonymous
8/20/21, 3:01 AM
@Anonymous Get the fuck out of here! Gypsy is a slur, my fucking ass!
8/20/21, 2:23 AM
More, please!
8/20/21, 12:19 AM
Another great story dude! I hope the next cream makes big hairy muscle daddies!

8/20/21, 12:40 AM
@pussyboy well you're in luck....
8/19/21, 2:46 AM
Very hot. Your writing is improving, dialogue feels more naturalistic. A nice himbo transformation without the boys becoming braindead zombies, which is always a bit too far for my taste.

8/20/21, 12:37 AM
@amul Thank you! Yeah I don't particularly like the zombie thing either, I definitely prefer just dumb and horny.
8/19/21, 2:23 PM
The physical transformation is well-described, but the chapter is so short it leaves out some basic things that would have helped me enjoy the story a lot more. For instance, I didn't understand the narrator's motivations or how he planned to deal with the fact there would now be 2 Rahims walking around.

8/19/21, 4:39 PM
its a story for guys to get off to. Wasnt looking too deep for motivation other than him being a horny guy. Thought that would be enough, but thanks for the feedback! @Hypnothrill

8/20/21, 12:17 AM
@Pitmusk99 I liked the story as is. Not every story needs a ton of detail.
Leo
8/18/21, 12:33 AM
Such a hot chapter, thank you for the fast update!! <3 I love everything you've done so far! My only request is that the dad becomes an obedient servant/butler who cooks, cleans, foot worships and sexually pleases his son. I would also love it if they all referred to Vince as master from now on. Let them all know who controls their lives ;)

Blackjinx123
8/19/21, 11:59 PM
@Leo, you are most welcome, and I'm so happy you like the series so far! i will say, there will be a house slave, but i wont spoil who it will be! i suppose you'll just have to keep reading if you want to know ;)
Jack
8/17/21, 7:10 AM
This was just good writing. Having both perspectives anchored by the sex going on between Vince and Emit? Brilliant. Love how well it ties the three stories together. It's not an easy thing to do, and I wouldn't be able to do it better, even if I was reduced to one hand for how often this story is making me jack off (or no hands, depending on how exciting I want my evening to be). I have to hand it to you, BlackJinx, you're really bringing some impressive talent to this site. I have stories I wanted to publish on here, and now I have to up my game just to try to get some readers! My one and only suggestion is, as always, another 200,000 words or so. You know, just in case.

Blackjinx123
8/19/21, 11:57 PM
@Jack, thank you so much for the praise! I'm so happy you enjoyed it. i have a feeling that by the time i finish this series your 200,000 word goal will either have been met or surpassed, so stick around! ;)