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8/17/21, 4:00 AM
I was willing to get past the awkward writing, but racial slurs are such a boner killer...

Anonymous
8/17/21, 6:29 PM
@hapaga5899 What racial slurs?

Anonymous
8/19/21, 2:54 AM
@hapaga5899 What racial slurs? I don't know what story you were reading. And WC, that's not his thing.

Anonymous
8/19/21, 10:45 PM
g/psy is a slur

Anonymous
8/20/21, 3:01 AM
@Anonymous Get the fuck out of here! Gypsy is a slur, my fucking ass!
8/20/21, 2:23 AM
More, please!
8/20/21, 12:19 AM
Another great story dude! I hope the next cream makes big hairy muscle daddies!

8/20/21, 12:40 AM
@pussyboy well you're in luck....
8/19/21, 2:46 AM
Very hot. Your writing is improving, dialogue feels more naturalistic. A nice himbo transformation without the boys becoming braindead zombies, which is always a bit too far for my taste.

8/20/21, 12:37 AM
@amul Thank you! Yeah I don't particularly like the zombie thing either, I definitely prefer just dumb and horny.
8/19/21, 2:23 PM
The physical transformation is well-described, but the chapter is so short it leaves out some basic things that would have helped me enjoy the story a lot more. For instance, I didn't understand the narrator's motivations or how he planned to deal with the fact there would now be 2 Rahims walking around.

8/19/21, 4:39 PM
its a story for guys to get off to. Wasnt looking too deep for motivation other than him being a horny guy. Thought that would be enough, but thanks for the feedback! @Hypnothrill

8/20/21, 12:17 AM
@Pitmusk99 I liked the story as is. Not every story needs a ton of detail.
Leo
8/18/21, 12:33 AM
Such a hot chapter, thank you for the fast update!! <3 I love everything you've done so far! My only request is that the dad becomes an obedient servant/butler who cooks, cleans, foot worships and sexually pleases his son. I would also love it if they all referred to Vince as master from now on. Let them all know who controls their lives ;)

Blackjinx123
8/19/21, 11:59 PM
@Leo, you are most welcome, and I'm so happy you like the series so far! i will say, there will be a house slave, but i wont spoil who it will be! i suppose you'll just have to keep reading if you want to know ;)
Jack
8/17/21, 7:10 AM
This was just good writing. Having both perspectives anchored by the sex going on between Vince and Emit? Brilliant. Love how well it ties the three stories together. It's not an easy thing to do, and I wouldn't be able to do it better, even if I was reduced to one hand for how often this story is making me jack off (or no hands, depending on how exciting I want my evening to be). I have to hand it to you, BlackJinx, you're really bringing some impressive talent to this site. I have stories I wanted to publish on here, and now I have to up my game just to try to get some readers! My one and only suggestion is, as always, another 200,000 words or so. You know, just in case.

Blackjinx123
8/19/21, 11:57 PM
@Jack, thank you so much for the praise! I'm so happy you enjoyed it. i have a feeling that by the time i finish this series your 200,000 word goal will either have been met or surpassed, so stick around! ;)
Aug 15, 2021
8/16/21, 12:39 AM
This story was very hot, and I agree with others, I see a lot of potential for a series, especially to solve some unanswered questions - but not too much, sometimes it's better to not know too much. Unlike the previous comment, I like the pink hair detail, I think it could add a lot if you expand some details on that idea. You see, for a time I dyed my hair to hot bubblegum pink (I loved how I looked, by the way), while changing my clothing style for something more modern, and I learned firsthand how important such a change in your appearance can be. It was a lot of fun experiencing the reactions of other people, especially men, the way they relate to you, what they expect from you, and for good and bad how judgmental they can be... and how you feel about those reactions. Interestingly, I learned how true some stereotypes are, despite all those people who say stereotypes aren't real. I'd say it's a 50-50, for my experience. As many have said in the comments, I'm curious about the other previous experiments, but here's one suggestion: what if some of those experiments went wrong in different degrees? Like, really wrong, that would be something cool to see. Also, the dyed hair detail made me imagine a cop being an unexpected experiment subject, with his hair changing to an electric neon blue... I'll leave it there, it's just a suggestion. Ha, ha!

8/16/21, 1:29 AM
@Plymouth58 I think we need you to write a story about how men treated you when you had that bubblegum pink hair! sounds like fun and sexy investigative journalism to me

8/16/21, 2:11 AM
@scablevoled Now that you mention it, it would be a fun project, buddy! I must find some way to frame it in a mind control plot to publish it here.

8/16/21, 4:10 PM
@Plymouth58 perhaps "salon owner needs new receptionist/hair model, and someone is desperate for a haircut before an interview!"

8/16/21, 4:48 PM
@scablevoled ahhhhhh, that's a good idea, it certainly would work well, buddy, thank you so much for the suggestion! I'll work on that story. I'm thinking that it would work fine making it in two parts, one describing mostly my experiences with some small fictional touches here and there, and a second going mostly fictional and wild, ha, ha.

8/16/21, 5:33 PM
@Plymouth58 Looking forward to reading! Godspeed

8/16/21, 7:51 PM
@Plymouth58 I love your idea of an experiment going wrong. The electric blue hair is a very nice touch too. The first idea that came to mind was having a cop be experimented on with the boy slut formula but something going wrong and he becomes a muscular power bottom. If you've got any other ideas don't hesitate to let me know!

8/19/21, 9:21 PM
@jockslut turning him into a power bottom sounds perfect, that would be fun! but please, keep him in his uniform if it's possible, or even better, an altered spoof of his uniform. Would be fun if his mind get caught in the middle of be fully transformed and becomes very slow minded and confused about the meaning and duties of a cop. I've seen you've uploaded a new chapter. I'm anxious to read it!
Aug 15, 2021
8/19/21, 5:28 PM
Really good story.
Anonymous
8/19/21, 7:55 AM
I love a good race change, especially arab! A daddy tf is the cherry on top! I wouldn't mind seeing the 2 Rahims meet either, or maybe this newly transformed Rahim is looking for a son? There's a few typos but other than that good work!

8/19/21, 2:12 PM
@Anonymous Rahim is described as Pakistani, so definitely not "arab." Although I didn't get the sense that the author cared deeply about this distinction.