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8/18/21, 8:03 PM
Chapter 13* specifically. Their original meeting is in chapter 5.

8/19/21, 8:37 AM
@Norismo Oh boy, yes, that's a bit complicated. Okay, so it's another version of the meeting, with the changes from the latter chapters? Okay, it makes a lot more sense that way. Still confused by the manor bit, but that might get explained later on.
8/19/21, 8:29 AM
Always love a story with pits. 🥰
8/19/21, 6:18 AM
Short and sweet. Now I want the two Rahims to meet. I love a good stink/musk story.
Ben
8/19/21, 6:00 AM
Fuck I love this~

8/19/21, 6:02 AM
im glad! thank you @Ben
Aug 15, 2021
8/19/21, 5:03 AM
Cream shared between two or more users that turns them into identical twins (triplets...)
8/19/21, 3:22 AM
Whoa, the football coach being fully aware of the hypno and totally into it but being unaware of some of the effects was incredibly erotic. Loved it.
8/19/21, 3:02 AM
Sad that there's no lactation, but I do love a good jock cow story nevertheless.
3/24/21, 11:47 PM
This is awesome. The verse totally rocks. And the musical orientation of the mind-altered servant-boys -- tenor, guitarist, DJ -- is perfect. Your scene-setting brings these guys very clearly into view. And the main character's slide into sex-servitude seems effortless, irresistible, and real.

8/19/21, 2:13 AM
@FreeThinker Thank you for the kind words. My general concept was inspired by "glamouring" from True Blood and a fantasy novel I read as a teen. I love the idea of magical, seductive characters-you can do so much with so little.
8/19/21, 1:37 AM
so happy to have you back with now the football team. nice
8/19/21, 12:43 AM
I like this story; definitely like the timely approach and the concept. The whole vampires in the police force takes me back to the Original Being Human. My only criticism is the digs on the other supernaturals in the statement. I would think that the digs and tensions would be kept behind closed doors and out of sight of the humans (doesn't mean that everyone wouldn't know about them.) I would expect them to say publicly something like: "We stand with our lycan brothers and sisters, who also have been persecuted and hunted due to the savagery promoted by the Church. We lend our voice to speak for the zombie community, to vocalize what they cannot about the ill treatment at the hands of humankind. We also vocalize the concerns of the ghostly community, who are ignored and trivialized by humanity." He should portray the supernatural community as unified to humanity, even though the tensions and fighting among species is occurring out of sight.