Recent Comments

8/18/21, 4:15 AM
The idea is impressive. Can't wait for continuation.
Daniel
8/18/21, 3:34 AM
I'm missing a sense of being 'taken' of corruption. I dunno dude, I never cared for video games, guess it's my bad I.J.S.
Daniel
8/18/21, 3:25 AM
hoping we're on our way bud ! I.J.S.
Daniel
8/18/21, 3:18 AM
I'm hanging dude...what's up ? I.J.S.
Daniel
8/18/21, 3:12 AM
duuuude ! c'mon man, where's the heat ? I.J.S.
Daniel
8/18/21, 3:05 AM
not into it bud, guess I'll try a few more chapters before I bail I.J.S.
Daniel
8/18/21, 3:00 AM
losing interest, well written but very clinical man ...I.J.S.
Daniel
8/18/21, 2:52 AM
ok dude, let's see what you think is hot ! I.J.S.
8/14/21, 12:39 AM
Loved this story so much!!! Mark losing control, and the way it was written showing how easy it is, just makes me lust for that gum and it was awesome!! Love the writing man!!

8/18/21, 12:15 AM
Thanks @Bramurai! I gave it another read myself - I'm pretty happy with how this one turned out :)
Aug 13, 2021
Oxly
8/17/21, 11:24 PM
wow!! incredible job, i wish i could meet a Daddy like this! 💖